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My OC's name is Dewfur she comes from RiverClan, and she is 32 moons old. She's a lesbian.

Dewfur's personality:

Dewfur is slightly more introverted. In converstions she is quiet, considerate, and funny. She is guided by her heart and likes to watch fish in the river. Dewfur can also be competitive and destructive. She doesn't share her opinions, but when she does it's in favor of war. Dewfur is power-hungry and is hoping to be leader one day.

Rank: deputy

Apperence: Her fur is desaturated gray with a striped tabby pattern. It is shaggy and long. She has a triangular face with circular blue eyes. She has a soft voice and a leafy scent. She has a long, fluffy tail and is considered loyal to most but she will turn evil.

Backstory: Her mothers were Featherface and Dappledpool, she was very close to Featherface because Dappledpool died shortly after giving birth to four kits, which left Featherface to raise them. Featherface was killed by a fox and after she became a apprentice and worked hard to try and please her dead parents. She soon began to go mad, and killed two of her siblings, Blueheart and Greythorn. Ever since she has been longing for power but acts loyal to one day become leader of RiverClan

Family:
Dappledpool (with StarClan)
Featherface (with StarClan)
Greythorn (with StarClan)
Blueheart (with StarClan)
Olivetail (alive)

Name: hawk heart
Age:27 moons

Description: dark brown with dark ginger and ginger speckles

Clan: thunder clan
Mate: autumn feather

Kin: father: spark fur mother: morning song siblings: a lot :) children: jay wing, blue feather, lion flame

Backstory: star clan told their med cat that hawk heart / hawk paw is to go a journey to find a cat to find a flower to cure an illness the med cat only had. When he got back the med cat had joined star clan and two new cats at camp and one of them he soon enough he would fall in love with

mine is called Briarstripe, she’s a brown tabby Norwegian forest cat with a muscular build. she was found as a kit in RiverClan territory and taken in, and because of this is devout to her clan and proving herself to her clanmates. she tends to consider honesty the best policy, and rarely lies. A StarClan cat by the name of Quickhare who’d been a member of RiverClan in the past took notice of her, and gave her a prophecy as a chance to prove herself to her clan. She made it to the rank of deputy whilst fulfilling this prophecy (which is currently undecided as to what it’ll be). only three moons after this prophecy, however, she was killed by the cat she’d came to love, drowned in the river by someone she’d trusted who’d only been getting close to her to find out what she could to to steal her rank as deputy after killing her (the cat who killed her is called Sunflare). this is all very vague atm tho and may change

Name: Waxtail
Gender: Tom
Age: 27 Moons

Clan: Luminousclan (OC clan which is basically the main clan like Thunderclan)

Rank: Warrior

Personality (Good & Bad): Hot tempered, clam (At times), independent, honest, responsible, quiet, stubborn, Disobedient

Likes: Bathing in sunlight, the smell after it rains, fall winds, being alone, frogs, & mice

Dislikes: Being wet, snow, loud noises, rats, and dogs

Appearance: Waxtail is a large sized tom, with a long haired pelt, which has red, black, and red-ish brown calico ears, tail, feet and muzzle, and bright amber eyes.

Waxtail has a few scars from his kit-hood, one on his back, two on his front right leg, and one on his left hind leg.

Score: 59% (I know Waxtail isn't the best OC and he also is quite an old one, but I was not expecting that )

Name: BlazeFlight
Gender: Tim
Pronouns: He/Him
Role: Leader
Fur: Black and orange tortoishell
Eyes: Light green

Personality: Cold and rought. Sometimes can be mean but he really doesn't mean it sometimes. He is misunderstood

Lore: He was bringed to the clan (not sure abt the name yet) when he was a kit. He was bringed to a queen named DoveShade. DiveShade accepted Blazekit as her own quickly and treated him like her own. DoveShade already had another kit named Copperkit. Copperkit was older than BlazeFlight and was redy to apprentice in the next moon. Blazekit's brother didn't like Blazekit. Most of the clan didn't also like Blazekit. After long moons of his brother not giving him attention and his mother's love he was named as an apprentice. Blazekit was now named Blazepaw and was trained by the leader. The leader was also very interested in Blazepaw and treated him nicely. The clan didn't still fully agree having Blazepaw in the clan. Copperpaw was really famous in the clan. He was hard working and did anything to get attention from his clan. Later it was shown that Blazepaw wasn't really bad to the clan and did his best to be accepted. The clan started to like Blazepaw now more. But then his brother got jelaus. Copperpaw started to frame Blazepaw from little bad doings. This started to get the clan suspicious about Blazepaw. Soon Copperpaw was named CopperClaw. But not even that long after CopperBush was named, another apprentice was also named Cinderpaw. Blazepaw was now 8 moons old, CopperClaw 13 moons and Cinderpaw 6 moons. Soon Blazepaw grew up and was named BlazeFlight at the age of 13 moons. Time went by and nothing exiting really happened until BlazeFlight reached the age of 37 moons. Cinderbelly and Blazeflight became mates! They had grown a lot if love for each other nad has been best friends since they has been apprentices. Blazeflight was now 37 moons and a warrior, Cinderbelly 35 moons and a warrior and CopperClaw 41 moons and deputy. The life was

name: Sunpaw

appearance: Brown tabby with sun ray like stripes and golden eyes and a cream colored muzzle.

Clan: Riverclan

Story: Sunpaw was born to a she cat named Pebbleleaf in Riverclan but her father left to join Windclan before she was born. she had 3 other siblings and one that died at birth that she never knew about. the medicine cat apprentice got a prophecy from starclan saying, "When the Sun shines brightest the Shadows will fade." at first Berrypaw (The medicine cat apprentice) did not know what this meant but connected two and two and decided the prophecy was about Sunpaw. soon later, Shadowclan took over. there were many battles but eventually Riverclan was forced to retreat and live on the island. Sunpaw, Creampaw, Toadpaw, and Rockpaw went on a mission to restore peace to all clans.

ivytongue is a smart mouthed sarcastic and agile shekitty

backstory!!: When ivytongue was a young cat she was constantly compared to everyone around her. She had to fit to her mothers (shadefern’s) standards she had to supress her emotions to live up to her mothers expectations thus leading to lots of built up emotions later. Many moons later ivy had gotten appointed for deputy of shadowclan. Although now instead of just her mothers she had to live up to everybody around hers standards slowly driving her insane one day she snapped and killed the leader (lynxstar) and her own mother. she couldnt belive what she had done she knew she needed to flee she ran as fast as she could away from everyone until she had found a barn. Everytime she had thought of what she’d done she would rip a piece of flesh off her paw in punishment. a couple moons later she decided she couldnt keep doing this so praying no other cat had heard of her past she decided to go to thunderclan. suprisingly they hadnt heard what she had done and let her in. after some moons she had her eye on a tomcat named “brindlefeather” he had liked her aswell or so she thought only for him to be seen with a shecat from RIVERCLAN?? after that she decided to build up walls around her so no one could hurt her again. After awhile she had made friends although shes always on edge still leading to her short temper and snappy personality. (STILL WORKING ON HER STORY :3 PROLLY GONNA CHANGE IT)

I did my OC Viverridcall!

Viverridcall of BatClan She-cat Med. Cat Apprentice Diluted orange and brown tabby with yellow eyes and short fur. Is part of the group that deals with the Herb Fox area, so she's learned a bit of fox tongue. She is fairly liked by the Herb Foxes, and is welcome into their herb grounds as often as she likes. She teaches a few of them cat tongue in exchange for their hospitality and kindness.

(The Herb Foxes are foxes that hang around a mushroom patch near the southeast BatClan border. They... Eat the fungi to seek a... High. They've come to respect the ways of the clan cats- thus see no reason to attack or threaten them for no reason.)

Name: Mothglare
Gender: Tom
Clan: windclan
Age: 12 Moons
Rank: apprentice

Appearance: A small shortfured ginger tabby with amber eyes

Personality: Protective, weird, caring, quick thinker, warm hearted, funny, clever, annoying.

Dislikes: family, battles, being stressed, the cold, fleas, slimy fish, shadowclan

Likes: bugs, friends, prey, exploring, kits, the leader, some loners, other apprentices

score: was like 78 or smt

KP name: Panda
Clan name: PandaPaw -> PandaHeart
Gender: She/They

Story: Panda was born in a shelter and adopted by an abusive pit or two-legs. She watched her sister who had come with her die in their hands so listened to the stars and followed the brightest ones to RiverClan. She was held prisoner for a few days and than apprenticed to the leader SwiftStar. When she became a warrior she fell in love with BeeWing (She/Her). They ended up taking in a pair of kits they found by the ThunderPath. They named them DangerKit (He/Him) and MiracleKit (She/Her). PandaHeart than passed away a few moons later as she shoved MiracleKit out of the way of a monster after she attempted to hunt a bird.

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Name: One'Foot
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 43 Moons.
Rank: Deputy

Personality: Trustworthy, fierce, realistic. Harsh, and his realism can appear as pessimism.

Appearance: One'Foot is a tall and broad-shouldered tom with a peanut coloured pelt and a chestnut brown tail and paws. One'Foot has shamrock green eyes and a brown area on his face. The tom has one extra dewclaw which is where he got his name, his ears are pointy and also.. brown.

Name: LogBranch
Gender: Male/Tom

Clan: (OC Clans) Formerly SparrowClan; Currently AppleClan

Age: 36 Moons (approx. 3 years)
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: A brown tom with a cream underbelly and dark brown stripes on his legs, a dark brown tail, and amber eyes.

Story: LogBranch was born with his sister, AshKit. They became apprentices together. Logbranch was mentored by StoneFall, a pure black tom with one blue eye and one green eye. LogBranch was loyal and always listened to his mentor. He and his sister also became warriors together. AshPaw became AshSong. And LogPaw became LogBranch. His sister was then chosen deputy. But then, while LogBranch was on patrol, he saw a beuaitul calico She-Cat. She was from AppleClan. Her name was FlowerPatch. LogBranch then figured out she liked him too. They then started meeting at the Big Oak and stuff happened. He then found out FlowerPatch was carrying his kits. By then his sister became leader and was now AshStar. He tried to hide everything but all else failed. He had one more choice and that choice was to join AppleClan. AppleClan only let him in because they were low on warriors. Now LogBranch is living with his mate and kits. But.. His sister is still mad at him...

Name: snowgoose
Gender: tom
Clan: thunderclan
Rank: senior warrior
Age: 55 moons

Personality: politeto clanmates, loyal, rude to loners and trespassers, not a fan of kittypets, patient

Apperance: a white longhaired bob tailed cat with yellow eyes, the tail looks like a goose's tail

History of name: as an apprentice he got bitten in the tail by a goose, he doesn't like to talk about it though

Name: Snake'lag
Age:16 moons
Rank: Queen

Personality:Deadly,mean,scary,blood luver,luvs kits.

Description,she-cat, has 3 kits that died by a Badgerstree clan warrior,kits names were Sparrowkit,Foxkit,and Bearkit,she is out getting revenge but sadly she died 3 moons after her kits died and now she is in the dark forest killing cats,but she found a love in the forest and her loves name is Lillowfern, Lillowfern is a she cat who also lost her kits, she is in Owltree Clan, and her and Snakeleg fell in love with each other and now they both are killing cats.

Name: Sunpool
Role: Medicine cat
Clan: Sunclan
Gender: she-cat

Scars: One on the right front paw and the other near the left ear

Personality: kind, helpful, quiet, friendly

Name - Blizzardstar
Gender - Male/Tom
Clan - Skyclan
Age - 53 Moons
Rank - Leader

Personality - Calm, clear-headed, dedicated, flexible, kind-hearted

Likes - Cold winter mornings, finding small stones and feathers to collect for his daughters, the arrival of new kits in Skyclan

Dislikes - hot days, (especially with his long fur), mosquitos, getting his fur wet after grooming, twolegs

Appearance - Blizzardstar has thick white fur, making him an excellent hunter during leaf-bare. He has huge, round, bright, sky blue eyes and huge paws. his sharp claws are tended to and look sharp and clean. He has one tiny scar near the base of his tail, he often tries his best to hide it though.

Mate - Lilytail
Kits - Glacierclaw, Lotusheart, Snowleap

Name: Mintnose
Clan: Riverclan
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat
Eyes: Mint Green

Fur: White with silver tabby legs, ears and tail

Descr:

So she met a Thunderclan tom named Chestnutfur (btw I made the whole Riverclan) when she was an app and they fall in love and he left the forest for Mintnose so she would't get caught but she still has his a kit but she didn't know abt him because he was only one and after he's born she left Sparklekit to a Twoleg place hoping they will afopt him and yea

Name:ravenkit (called ravenwind when older)
Gender: female/she-kit
Clan:shadowclan
Age:3 moons
Rank:kit (future warrior)

Personality:playful,loud,curios,impulsive,loyal,adventurous,irritable at times

Likes:playing with other kits,exploring,listening to the elders stories,warm weather

Dislikes:having nothing to do, no one paying attention to her, rude cats/kits,the cold weather

Appearance(as an adult and kit): fluffy long haired black,grey and white tabby patched fur with a small dark grey heart shaped splotch on her chest a large fluffy tail a short and sturdy build, claws are a common length,one lilac eye the other a icy blue, light pink inner ears nose and paw pads,sharp fluffy pointed ears

Name: Half-face
Gender: Male
Clan: JungleClan (OC clan, not a real one)
Rank: Warrior
Apprentice: Flowerpaw
Mate: Sunsetstream

Appearance: Large, toirtoishell tom with a strangely coloured face. One side of his face being black, and the other ginger. He has a blue eye on his right and a green one on his left. He has a few scars on his legs and muzzle.

Personality: elegant and snotty. He can talk trash about anyone, but is very sensitive about his own look. He gets aggressive if anyone even mentions his face, and hates his name. He has a soft-side though, and he's kind at heart. He's a great fighter and never gives up hope. Half-face is bold but bitter.

Backstory: Half-kit was born to Hopethorn, a kind queen. He has an average "kit life" but his apprenticeship is when it all began. Half-paw was often teased about his appearance and name. Half-paw never let them bully him for long though, he spat rumors about other cats around, and cats started avoiding him more. Later, he helps fight off ForestClan cats from JungleClan's camp, and earns his warrior name "Half-face". Half-face then earns his long-waited respect from other cats and is treated as a regular warrior. He later develops a huge crush towards Sunsetstream, a pretty tabby she-cat. He also confesses his feelings and is glad Sunsetstream feels the same. Half-face then gets a shy apprentice, Flowerpaw. He lives the rest of his life as a normal warrior with a few friends.

My score: 98% (why do my background characters score more than my main ones eek)

Name: StripePelt
Gender: female
Clan: NightClan

StripePelt is a young energetic warrior and has an apprentice named claypaw she's a light brown tabby and has a sister LaurelLeaf who is a medicine cat apprentice I got 70 I think it was because of the generic name

Name: Stormbellow
He/they
Pelt: patchy gray with some noticeable scars
Greenish-yellow eyes
Cunning, vengeful, swift

As a kit, he was very confident and couldnt wait to be a warrior, always wanting to help out. When he reached 6 moons, he became Stormpaw and was very well liked. One day, though, his sister, Minnowpaw wanted to play, resulting in Stormpaw falling off of a large, jagged boulder, resulting in several scars. After he healed, he noticed a shift in how other cats reacted when he was around. Thinking nothing of it, he continued his apprentice duties and eventually was given the warrior name Stormbellow. In the first few moons of being a warrior, he became close with a she-cat named Owlpetal, and developed a crush on her. Certain that she felt the same, he admitted his feelings to her. Owlpetal was stunned at first, then politely rejected him, saying that she was in love with another tom. Angry and saddened by this he hid in the warriors den for days, not talking to anyone. Eventually, his anger grew, and he thought Owlpetal had rejected him because of his scars. So he lured Minnowflash (Minnowpaw) into the forest, where he proceeded to attack and kill her, because she was the reason he had the scars. He returned to camp, and pretended that rogues attacked and killed Minnowflash. Feeling better, he returned to his warrior duties where he found out that Owlpetal was expecting another toms kits. The old anger grew inside him again, and he put deathberries in her food the next day. This time, he was seen by a Clanmate, and exiled, where he got ran over by a monster and still tries to make his old clan miserable from the Dark Forest.

Name: Merrytrot
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 67 Moons (approx. 5.6 years)
Rank: Medicine Cat

Positive Traits: Playful with kits, wise, humble of his rank

Negative Traits: Empathy issues, impatient with older cats, defensive of his blindness

Likes: Gathering herbs, cool weather, rain, snails/frogs

Dislikes: Hot/Humid weather, enclosed spaces, aquatic prey

He is chestnut-colored, but a large portion of his body is white, including his paws, tail, and muzzle. His chestnut markings are tabby striped, and they look almost red from far away. He is very grizzled, and his ears are both shredded. His eyes are cloudy due to his blindness, and the lack of black pupils make his gaze a bit unnerving.

He is quite long-furred, and he has a thick white mane. His tail is also quite bushy, and they are both areas that often get tangled with herbs and twigs.

He often trots confidently, which is why he was given him prefix and suffix, "merry" and "trot".

Scoring: 69%! I'm surprised I did this well.

Her name is FrostGlare and she is a pure white cat with crystal blue eyes, she was a kitty pet until she joined Wind clan. Her mate is DewStar and her kits are GoldenGlare and GorseFur. Her kitty pet name was Frost(named after my real cat). She is graceful, but she is untrusted by her clan mates. And my score was 94 and I feel good about that.

Name: Eclipseshadow
Gender: She-cat
Clan: My OC clan "Wildclan"
Age: 26 moons
Rank: Warrior

Personality: She is shy and sometimes and be a bit harsh on younger cats, but once she opens up she is kindhearted and loyal.

Appearance: She is a black cat with a white splotch over her left eye. She has very pale grey eyes.

Quote: "Life turns endlessly. If we sit and wait for a moment we lose out time we could be working."

name : archeye
pronunciati on : /ärch eye/
past names : archpaw, archkit.
future names : none.
age : 19 moons
gender : tom
sexual orientation : homosexual
rank : deputy
allegiance : palmclan (an oc clan.)

description : leggy sleek black thick furred tom with pale green eyes and six toes on each paw.