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Name: Tansypaw/TansyFeather
Clan: Cliffclan (a rp I made)
Highest rank: Medicine cat
Age: 54 moons

Appearance: she is a coco brown with light tan ankles, tail end, belly fur, eye spot, and ear as well as ivy green eyes

Personality: she is very wise, but very blunt as well as sarcastic (like Jayfeather)

Backstory: she used to be a loner, but when she came to the clan, they were in dire need of a medicine cat. They had died previously with no apprentice. Tansypaw hen became a warrior apprentice to Minceclaw and trespassed on Rainclan (riverclan) and was stuck there for a moon helping their medicine cat. The leader, ButterflyStar, suggested she became a medicine cat, so when she got back to her own clan, she used her experience as a loner and became TansyFeather, the medicine cat with an apprentice, Walnutpaw. She would die tragically b a cave-in of her herb storage.

Name: Rowanstrike
Age: 26 moons
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Clan: ThunderClan

Appear ance: Rowanstrike is a brown furred spotted tabby. He has a lean, almost feminine build, and is often mistaken for a she-cat. His fur is short-medium length and is somewhat curly. His eyes are a bluish violet color, the right of which has a light tan spot around it. A large scar horizontally spans across his muzzle. His ears are large and a darker shade of brown. His hind paws fade to the same shade of dark brown. His spots and long, skinny tail are the same color as well. His front legs are covered with stripes instead of spots.

Negative Personality traits: Snarky, vengeful, skeptical/untrustin g, prideful, unforgiving, stubborn, short-tempered

Neu tral traits: Competitive, outspoken, mischievous

Positi ve traits: Ambitious, witty/clever, motivated, independent, introspective, honest, astute, curious, protective, trustworthy

Final score: 96%

Goldenfur. mate: Boucingcloud for skyclan

A shiny bright Shadowclan warrior queen with white points

three children, Butterflykit(leap), Leopardkit(pelt) and Sugarkit(Leaf)

She was born with a missing eye and then had the other pecked out by a hawk, blinding her completely. When her children were kits Leopardkit nearly died by badger, who sliced off Leopardkit's eye, after that, she showed favoritism to Leopardkit and Butterflykit(Who was deaf) and made Sugarleaf despise Shadowclan, and eventually became a loner with a KITTYPET mate, Callie.

Name: Pale'tooth (He/him)
Clan: Shadowclan
Age: 37 moons
Rank: Deputy

Personality: They may come off as intimidating as they are quite a large cat, imperturbable, cynical and stern, will not stand for injustice and is calculative

Likes: likes to observe others, watch the night sky

Dislikes: Brash and rude cats, impulsive behavior. Dishonesty, Disloyal cats and Rogues. He finds Kittypets to be useless beings with no survival skills but may give chance if Given a good reason.

Looks: A fully white cat(albino), with a thick bushy mane and tail, very large in appearance, large paws. Their coat is not very well maintained and may often give the impression that he is wild and messy. He has Grumpy eyes. They have a very low voice and striking eyes.

Name: Red-Stripe
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 41 moons
Rank: Senior Warrior
Clan:WindClan

Personality: Distrusting (from past trauma) Skittish Determined.

Likes: Going on Patrols, Assisting classmates

Dislikes: TwoLegs, Streets, anything implying TwoLags are around

Appearance: A somewhat larger cat with dusty grey fur and amber eyes. A red stripe of permanent hair dye on her back. She doesn't have notable scars, apart from one on the top of her head.

She was taken as an apprentice from a more distant clan, but was abused by her Two Legs and escaped to WindClan. She is generally cautious of others and doesn't have a lot of friends.

I got a 69%, lol

My OC is well made
Lavender'Wing
She-Cat/WindClan apprentice/8 moons

Appearance: Lavender'Wing has a lilac pelt with a slightly deeper shade of marble rosettes. With a rare eye mutations, making her eyes a shade of purple.

Health Issues: Limp in both hind legs

Personality: Charismatic/Positive/Eager to please/Dishonest/Submissive/Self-conscious

Likes: Exploring the moor/Causal chats/Windy days/Green-Leaf

Dislikes: Going to the medicine den/Rain/Failing

Shorten lore: Lavender'Wing was the only kit out of a litter of 5 to not be a still birth. But was instead given the imperfection where a bone in both her hind legs weren't put in their proper places. And wasn't able to walk until she was 5 moons. Though with both her parents being rouges, they only stayed with her when she was unable to walk. Once she was able to all, her parents picked her up and dropped her off in a bush on WindClan territory. Lavender'Wing waited for a few nights for her parents return, but was saddened when she realized they were never coming back. It was only her cries of sorrow that lead the WindClan warriors to her. Though since that day, she has been accepted into the clan. And was given her proper prefix and suffix. Lavender'Wing is very grateful to StarClan for how her life has turned around. Though she might not fully understand it just yet.

(Just for context: This takes place in it's own universe entirely, separate from main story and merely uses the concepts and environments from the books)

Name: Corpse'Blossom (Edgy name, I know, but it was given to him as a joke/nickname by the rogue group that he ran with to mock warriors names)

Gender: Tom/Male

Clan: Previously in a Rogue group called "Wastrels" but took advantage of Shadow Clan as they were low on cats.

Age: 58 moons (Approx. 5 yrs)

Rank: Previously Unaffiliated but bullied his way to Leader when the clan was low on cats.

Personality: Tyrannical, Oppressive, Good sense of humour, Abrasive, Sneaky, Confident, Brave, Loyal (After being driven out of Shadow Clan)

Likes: Getting his own way, Being in control, Birds, Peaceful walks, Fighting for his way (verbally)

Dislikes: Being told he's wrong, Being told what to do, Being alone.

Appearance: He is a scrawny, ratty tom with darkish-grey with dark tabby stripes and white highlights. He has sharp orange eyes and a toothy smirk.

His pelt is often well groomed but can become unruly fast in times of stress or anger. He has long, slightly pointy ears (his left ear having a small tear in it due to play fighting as a kit).

I haven't made a Warriors OC in a good few years so a score of 67% was to be expected heh. However, Corpse is only one of my OC's and I am inspired to go back and improve him. Thank you for the feedback, have a good day :3

My oc!
Name: Creek skip
Clan: ( oc clan ) barren clan
Rank: medicine cat
Age: about 40 moons
She cat

Creek skip is a disabled medicine cat who was born without one of her back legs. Creek skip is a very lively cat who can run like the wind but is very forgetful. She would get to an injured warrior as fast as she can but then realize she has nothing to help this cat and have to run back multiple times . Because of this she’s not the most favored medicine cat. The clan is also does not respect creak skip very much for the leader deputy and medicine cat only having their roles because all the three roles died in battle because of rouges. And the three roles were filled by 3 siblings cats who had little to no training so a barely trained medicine cat is not very admired by anyone. But because of this creek skip likes to spend time exploring and finding new things as it bring her joy in sorting all of her plants and berries.

DrizzleOfTheStorms - (Drizzle`Step for short)

Previously apart of Tribe Of Rushing Water, later joined RiverClan.

Personality Traits: Tranquil, polite, patient & protective.

Short Lore Description: When he lived with TORW, he, his brother, & his mentor set off on a hunting mission, when a landslide from a recent storm caused the earth to collapse on the cliff-side, Resulting in the death of his former mentor & brother. Lost & alone, Drizzle assumed if he were to return, they would cast him out, therefore he traveled for a few moons, discovering the clans. He joined the clans as a permanent Den-Dad, & would raise kits & help queens there until his death. (Drowned saving a kit from a rouge's claws)

Name: Ambersight
Clan: ThunderClan (former kittypet)
Gender: She-cat

Backstory: Her father was a Clan cat, but she grew up with her kittypet mother and kittypet sister. When her mother died of heart failure, she couldn't bear to live in the same house as her fallen mother. She set out to find her father, despite being blind. She finally found ThunderClan, but they told her that her father had died in a battle. She was heartbroken, but she joined ThunderClan, as soon, she became a well respected medicine cat. She met her sister at the border and they decided to have fun together for the last time, despite Ambersight being a medicine cat. They didn't get caught and they had fun. She ended up never breaking the code ever again, and had a good life over all.

Corvidstone is a black, medium furred cat with grey spots and green eyes.

Taken into Riverclan as a stray kit, Corvidkit wasnt very popular among the clans. They were quite the opposite, actually, with very few actually liking them. The few that they got along with was the queen that raised them, a couple other kits that shared the nursery with them, the leader, and of course the medicine cats.

Growing up, other cats often outcasted them, making them feel unwanted. They spent their free time as an apprentice/warrior out in the forest, practicing battle moves, hunting, and occasionally helping the Riverclan medicine cat look for and gather herbs.

The first prophecy was received by the medicine cat. It worried them, as they werent quite sure what it meant. In the end, the prophecy drove Corvidstone out of the clan, much to the leader and medicine cats dismay. Their adoptive mother and past playmates had begun to grieve. Their adoptive mother had actually taken off from her warrior duties temporarily, as she was finding it difficult to cope with.

The second prophecy was received by Corvidstone while they were on exile. They hesitantly headed back to clan territory, realizing that their old clans camp was being attacked by an enemy clan. They rush in, yowling out orders from a rocky ledge and leaping in to help fight when needed. In the end, their adoptive mother dies due to battle wounds, the leader has 3 lives left, and the deputy has been retired to the elders den due to permanent injuries. A couple nights pass, and the leader decides to make a final decision. Corvidstone is now made deputy, later on dying in a large battle against the other four clans.

Name: Raccoonshade
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: An OC Clan named "BrightClan"
Age: 19 Moons
Rank: (Young) Warrior

Personality: Mischievous, clumsy, reckless, stubborn, sneaky, untrustworthy

Likes: Starry nights, messing with people

Dislikes: Being told what to do, boring situations

Appearance: Raccoonshade is a small, lithe tom that has gray fur with black raccoon-like markings. He gets his name from his raccoon-like appearance. He has distinctive orange eyes with a singular white streak on his face.

His pelt is slick and smooth with short fur. He has almost no scars visible. He has short legs and a very slender build.

Backstory: Raccoonshade's mother was named Duskstep. She didn't want anything to do with him and often mistreated him. She was very neglectful towards him. The closest thing he had to a mother was an elder in his clan named Moonshine. She took care of him when his mother wouldn't and told him stories to keep him entertained. His father was named Spiderstar and he was unaware that he was born for a long time. He has an older brother whom he is very close to. His name is Stoneriddle. He was actually mentored in secret by him. They would meet up when their clans fell asleep, as they are in different clans.

93%! Yes!

Name: Dogsnap
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: SunClan
Age: 48 moons (about 4 years old)
Rank: Warrior (nearly deputy)

Appearance: A sleek and somewhat fluffy light brown tabby she-cat, with a black sock on her right paw, and hazel brown eyes. Her tail is puffed up and out like a Somali cat, and she has black ear tufts to show it. She has a petite mouth on the outside, but when she opens it, it looks double it's original size.

Personality: Dogsnap is known for her sass, even for her age she's a bit lively too. Blunt, and confident, although she might hesitate and discourage it if it's too outrageous for even her.

Likes: Chamomile petals and the strong smell of them. She also likes to nibble on her claws, which is a bad habit, and makes her pristine self look broken by her eroded-looking claws.

Dislikes: She dislikes having to do duties, or being waken up by another cat. Sleeping in is her thing. Or someone sassing her back or being able to. But, that rarely happens :)

My score is 71%, not the best but good.

Name: Tansypaw/TansyFeather
Clan: Cliffclan (a rp I made)
Highest rank: Medicine cat
Age: 54 moons

Appearance: she is a coco brown with light tan ankles, tail end, belly fur, eye spot, and ear as well as ivy green eyes

Personality: she is very wise, but very blunt as well as sarcastic (like Jayfeather)

Backstory: she used to be a loner, but when she came to the clan, they were in dire need of a medicine cat. They had died previously with no apprentice. Tansypaw hen became a warrior apprentice to Minceclaw and trespassed on Rainclan (riverclan) and was stuck there for a moon helping their medicine cat. The leader, ButterflyStar, suggested she became a medicine cat, so when she got back to her own clan, she used her experience as a loner and became TansyFeather, the medicine cat with an apprentice, Walnutpaw. She would die tragically b a cave-in of her herb storage.

°Name:GhostStride
°Gender: Tom/male

°Clan: Krovnclan. The word 'Krovn' was an honour to one of the cat that the leader close with and they have done many good thing and so the leader consider to use their name for the clan (Since it's before the clan were create and this was when this group of cats migrate to their now settled territory and create this clan far from others)

°Age: 28 moons (still alive and counting)
°Rank:Medicine cat

°Apperance: GhostStride is a sleek white coated tom with a slender and a bit scrawny build as if he a sickly runt of a litter. He is albinism and born with a milky eyes that give him quite a trouble. Has a fluffy nape and feather-like tail.

°GhostStride is a wise and has a wide range of knowledge despite his bad eyesight he is a cunning and slippery cat even though he didn't train to be a warrior but he got quite a high sense and can sometime overwhelming him and make him become agitated at a time. He is kind-hearted to some degree mostly because of his lack of understanding thing that he wouldn't be learning from his father or his mentor solely because he see thing that isn't important to his purpose of being a medicine cat useless or pay no mind to it as much as he should.

•Like: collecting stones and put it in his nest, feathers that he often stick into his furs, love many small critter despite the danger of it, birdwatching, windy weather, water and snakes (As it said, he love many small critter..he just sat there blankly)

•Dislike: dogs, family reunion (they have a lil family reunion every full moon and some cousin there he dislike), kitten and apprentice in general, open space grassland, loud noise and SUN.

°His father is Bristlingstar and his mother is Lightstream (Former rogue)

Name: Faintflame
Gender: She-cat
Clan: ThunderClan

Faintflame is a rather serious, yet caring she who is large in size and had a dark brown coat fading into a deep orange; hence the name: Faintflame. She has a scar across the bridge of her nose and medium-long fur near her cheeks. Her eyes are a deep amber color, which makes the orange parts of her pelt appear brighter. She's a warrior who was 59 moons of age before her tragic death at the cause of a forest fire, a burning branch falling on top of her. She had a mate; Aspenfall, who was her soul mate. Sadly, he passed away during a battle with ShadowClan, the grief stinging like an open wound in the heart.

Name: Goldenorchid
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: My OG clan called "InkClan"
Age: 53 moons
Rank: Medicine Cat

Personality: Overprotective, Sweet, Loving, Gullible, Judgmental, Forgiving, Trustworthy.

Appearance: GoldenOrchid is a short, cream and cinnamon colored she-cat with large, shing brown eyes. To make herself look better, she often puts and orchid near her ear, hence her prefix "orchid". She got this habit sense she was a apprentice when her clanmates mocked her for her large scar from a racoon attack, calling her "weak" and other rude names, so she put on an orchid to look better. Her pelt is clean and smooth, she has short hair, where you can see her scar pretty clearly. Her pelt was "golden" to her mother, hence the "golden", though when she became older the color faded a little.

Her Prophecy: Although she wasn't in her prophecy, she did deliver one. "The stars will cascade and the feather of the quail shall smother all threatens the hay." was her prophecy, at first no one knew what this meant. "The feather of the quail" was indeed a cat, Birchfeather, and the "hay" was another cat, Deernose.

(Family)
Mother: Rabbitwhisker
Father: Pebblejaw
Sisters: Maplestorm, Ivyheart
Brother: Dawnsky.
Rating: 95% I'll take that :3

REDO SORRY!))
I did my OC Viverridcall!

Viverridcall of BatClan // She-cat // Med. Cat Apprentice // Diluted orange and brown tabby with yellow eyes and short fur.

// Is part of the group that deals with the Herb Fox area, so she's learned a bit of fox tongue. She is fairly liked by the Herb Foxes, and is welcome into their herb grounds as often as she likes. She teaches a few of them cat tongue in exchange for their hospitality and kindness.// Her mother was a part of a recent prophecy. She has yet to return. HeavyWing (a color pointed She-cat warrior) took on a parental role for her. Her father is a rouge. He visits from time to time. He was given permission by the clan leader (Racoonstar), as he knows how difficult it can be for a cat to grow up without their family.

(The Herb Foxes are foxes that hang around a mushroom patch near the southeast BatClan border. They... Eat the fungi to seek a... High. They've come to respect the ways of the clan cats- thus see no reason to attack or threaten them for no reason.)