Hogwarts, magic, and secrets Pt. 1 | Comments
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Nice work.
Although, I have a question. How come Esmeralda does not know of various Gryffindors when she's in Gryffindor?
Stor y has been too fast. I think you should write a bit less. It feels we're rushing.
But, nice plot!!
aadee1 -
She knows of them just doesn't know them. And the reason being you were a bit of a loser in first and second years. And yes the first one in every series is a bit rushed, it'll get slower.
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