One Direction love story (part 2) | Comments

Ok guys! I just went back and fixed some mistakes i made. Rae is now almost 18 and the name isn't jade anymore. I forgot that i put my name in the first one. oops. @ILuvHolister i wasnt looking for someone to critique me so just plz dont

lol well of course im gonna say yes!
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes
im gonna say yes

erg! sorry everyone! I've been so busy lately and i haven't started the next one. :(

Jade should be a bit older. Please make it longer next time and get the next part out soon.

I LOVED it it was just so AMAZING I can't even say. I have a ? Isn't she 13 an isn't Zayne like 19 and doesn't she go to school? It was FANTASTIC I LOVED it and CANT WAIT for the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Im not that in love with zayn,,,, but he's still awesome! :) & so R these series!!!

Wow! You got your done!!!! Now i just feel lazy :P anyways I loved it!!! And do I get to go on tour?????????

NEXT ONE NOW BUT YOU STOLE ZAYN HE'S MINE I met him tho i haz his autograph! No joke i had a vip pass.

PLZ HURRY UP WITH THE NXT PART!!! :)