Cursed Pt 2 | Comments
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@PuffBall Are you insinuating I wrote a bad comment? I wrote constructive criticism, because I want her to improve her writing even further. Did I ever say this was bad? To be honest, I think the plot and characters are awesome :)
@Sapphire Flames Wow, no need to be offensive O.o I'm trying to help you, I'm not saying this sucks. In fact, it's pretty awesome :P
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Once again, you need to work a little bit on your spelling... And I noticed you said the protagonist's name was Aden. Wasn't it Bella in the last part? Make up your mind :P And what about the protagonist's parents? Won't they suspect anything when they come home and find their foster-daughter is gone? Doesn't Bella/Aden even think about her parents?
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Am I late? Oh I hope I'm not late!! And don't listen to any bad comments your writing is amazing and even though I didn't notice about the writing grammar doesnt mean I looooooooved it, it's setting, plot, details, description and most of all *smiles* the boys. I sure hope u make part 3 soon!!!
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@DarknessOnMyEyes
I wasn't trying to be rude or mean. I welcome criticism. And I appreciate what you were trying to do. Most people will say it was really good, but they think it sucks. I just want people to be honest on here. Sorry if I came off mean or rude. I promise I wasn't trying to be like that!
@PuffBall
T hanks I try my best! -
Yeah well I ws working late into the mornign on this and was tired. SOrry if there are mistakes but I'm not perfect. Yeah her name is Bella, and again, I was up until four doing this.
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