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  • My thoughts first reading it "oh god it's another 'girl hates moving' story... or is it?" then I kept reading it and DAAAAAMMMM I'm hooked. I'm sorry for thinking that in the first place but I just hate Hate HATE it when characters complain about moving. It's a personal hatred, don't ask why. However this was really good, and because YOU were writing it I knew it was gonna get good... eventually. I agree with Aria, get some details on Bethany on part 2. Also is this going to be mystery or horror? If it's both, is it really gory horror? because... I'm a scaredy cat and I'll be the first to admit it any day. Anyways, I did like this and I'm also interested in that ghost girl. So, can you forgive me for my annoyingly quick judgement? because I'm really sorry for that... seriously

    Missy Prissy Cat
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  • Sweet, mysteries are more complex than horror anyways. Oh and I agree with changing things or giving them a twist (in fact I've done it myself in my own story) so I'm fine with that. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, so I hope more people get to see it because it's AWESOME and I have no idea what's going to happen now

    Missy Prissy Cat
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  • MPC - I agree. There are to many stories starting with the person moving, but as you seen I've switched it around a bit. Thank you for saying you'd think it would turn out god because I was the writer, that ment a lot. I've taken Aria's idea into consideration and will fit that in somewhere. It's going to be more like mystery, less horror, you can't really make it scary because you don't have the music and -- you know what I mean. But I'm looking forward to making part two, I hope you're looking forward to read it.

    IcyDesignns
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  • This was really good. I enjoyed reading it :). And that conversation with the parents, reminded me of what my parents said when I told you about that incident when I was 6. They said I was going crazy. And my brother said that I was crazy. But, anyways, great part. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait for the next one :D.

    DaughterOfApollo
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  • This was an amazing story. The idea is genius and I love the whole haunted theme. I would love to have a writer like you check out my work and hear what you have to say about it. This is not an ad to check out my stories, I would just like you to check them out. Thank you and great story.

    chaz55
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  • Well, I would tell you what I planned out to happen at the end, but I don't want to spoil it! Only 13 people have viewed it, I hope more do, though. I think this one is really good and descriptive, it deserves to be seen. It means a lot to me that you like it, thank you.

    IcyDesignns
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  • Hm...It's interesting. I'd like to know more about my sister who died. This reminds me of 'Stranger With My Face.' You know that movie? You should watch it. It's all....well it's better to watch it, anyway, great job x

    Aria
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  • No, I've never heard of that movie. But it's not just about her sister, Charleston, SC is haunted.

    IcyDesignns
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  • I like it. You're a really good writer and I was immediately drawn in.

    fireprincess1996
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  • I really liked it too it was really descriptive and fun to read i enjoyed it nd cant wait to read pt 2 please make it soon but dont rush i just cant wait

    NatalieGrace
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  • I liked this it was awesome!!!

    Ashl3y
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  • I've realized :P

    Aria
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  • Thanks.

    IcyDesignns
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  • I love it! I wish there were more horror but I like any ways!

    fallen_angel831
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  • Cool.

    Lucyheartfillia
    1

  • This was great i love it I WANT MORE!

    Candy20
    1

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