~lost forever~ part 1 | Comments
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It seems like a good start, but you should make it longer or, at least, make the paragraphs longer. And mind your punctuation. It really does seem like a good story. I say make the next one. And explain the situation in it. P.S. I don't mean to sound mean. Sorry if I do.=)
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was this based off the titanic
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Hmm... I'm not sure yet I'm going to have to take the other part's of this
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hmm...never thought of tht :O i might do tht
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