Cleo; The Misscreation
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Thread Topic: Cleo; The Misscreation
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Safiya's world was dark, yet, she was aware she was there. She could feel something deep inside of her. It was like a fire that spread through her body, causing a soft tingling feeling to emmerse from inside of her. She didn't know who she was. She didn't know what she was. It was too dark, she realized. Too dark, far too dark. She wanted to see. She wanted to know what her purpose was. A word- no, a name echoed through her mind. Safiya. It began to echo louder and louder. She wanted to scream, but she had no will--
Abruptly, as if someone had turned on a light, Safiya's eyelids fluttered open. She tried to force herself up, but something was pinning her down on a cold surface. She blinked at the lights above her as she heard strange sounds. Suddenly, a concerned face appeared before her, covered in strange clothing. All the young girl could see was the person's eyes. "Sorry," the woman said to her, a soft voice that calmed Safiya immediately. "We had to make sure you wouldn't hurt yourself, or someone else." Behind her, another doctor muttered, "She's too early. We didn't get a chance to restore her true memories. The princess project.. Is a failure." The woman glared at him, placing a gloved finger over her face mask as if to tell him to silence himself. -
(Oh, wait. I just remembered a problem with this story. Because the clone was a mistake, she doesn't get a name. The name you gave her could be the name of the princess she was cloned from. But they would need to take that name away from her because people may mistake her for the correct clone of the princess. That could cause problems. So they give the clones acronym names based on their mistake. So I had originally named your character Cleo, which means: Cloned. Lost. Experience. Original.
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(Ehh I prefer my name, I thought of it more as she created it on her own than what the scientists/cloners came up.. But if Cleo is better for you, then, I guess I can go with Cleo.)
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(Your post can still work though. The could have only put the princesses name to her memories. So she thinks her name is Safiya but eventually gets used to Cleo.)
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(Ok)
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"What are we going to do!?!" The chief android A2S freaked in her monotone but human voice. "Well, we have some memories here. They are of a human nurse. So no one will really notice." The top engineer android 3E90 replied. "What if she get's emotions?" His assistant, 60B asked. "Then she'll be a better nurse." 3E90 answered, taking a USB with the memories of a human nurse and plugging it in. "1DA. 1DA. Do you hear us?" Another nurse android, AID10 asked. 1DA sat up and looked around. She saw her coworkers as her memories kicked in. The only memory she didn't get was the name of the human nurse. That memory was replaced with 1DA which she misheard as Wanda because of her human instinct. "Yes... Yes I hear you." 1DA replied in a human voice like the others. However, unlike the others, her voice was not monotone. It was warm and pleasant. This worried them. So they decided to ignore it... For now.
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Safiya waited for the doctor to remove her restraints. She immediately touched her throat, wondering how the other two were communicating. However, as if on instinct, she knew what she had to do. Looking to the female, she said her name: "Safiya." Immediately, the female doctor shook her head, taking her hand. The doctor said, "Your name is Cleo." The teenage clone frowned, looking to the male. He was busy reporting the incident to the higher ups. Safiya hesitated, clutching the side of the table, before she spoke again. "Can I be Safiya?" Once again, the doctor shook her head, meeting eyes with the male doctor. They both knew that they couldn't fix the error. After a moment of silence, the male responded, "We'll need to send Cleo to the school. Prepare for her departure." With that, he was gone, leaving the two females alone.
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"1DA. You are to report to the station. SB3 and SB7 will take you there." A25 ordered. "Yes mam." 1DA replied. "May I ask where I'm going?" 1DA asked politely. "Curiosity?" A25 asked, a little puzzled. "Ah... It's probably nothing." A25 sighed, sending 1DA off. 1DA followed the bots to the train which was like a train but worked more like an elevator. 1DA sat across from a young girl with light brown hair that was being tightly braided by the woman scientist who sat next to her.
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(Is that young girl Cleo or a different scientist & girl?)
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(Cleo. All the clone girls get braided pigtails as a part of the uniform.)
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(I thought so but I wanted to make sure! Thanks)
Safiya waited patiently for the woman to finish messing with her hair. It felt odd, having someone else's fingers running through her hair. She heard doors open, and she looked up from the floor to get a glimpse of the person. She was gorgeous, but unlike Safiya and the scientist, she had eyes that looked too unreal of a green. She wanted to ask the scientist who the girl was, but felt it would be best to stay quiet. -
1DA thought the girl was staring at her. She decided to introduce herself. "Hello. I am Wanda. What is your name?" 1DA asked. "Your name isn't Wanda. It's 1DA." The other androids corrected, looking annoyed. "My apologies..." 1DA replied with a frown.
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Safiya jolted in surprise when the other girl spoke. She stared at her, ignoring the scolding her scientist gave her as she moved. After a moment of hesitation, she said, "My name is Safiya. But it is also.. Cleo.." She frowned at herself, wondering why she even bothered to say either name. Both were strange on her tongue. The female scientist glanced at the robot as she finished the braid. Normally, she wouldn't have spoken to an android, but she didn't want to disappoint Cleo. It was in her best interests to learn. "1DA.. This is Cleo." The scientists looked at the other androids, narrowing her eyes. She wondered if 1DA was also going to the school.
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