Hellfire Romance
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Thread Topic: Hellfire Romance
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Please join!
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Your plot isn't descriptive and its Mary Sue-ish)
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Whatever! If I knew where my BF went I would go to his thread and ask him to beat you up.
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I agree with puppet there. It's extremely mary sue and god moding to the max. Also it's too short of a description.
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He doesn't live in my area I'm simply telling you that you should fix it but I get a threat?)
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C1 is a human but they've always felt different it's not until their eighteenth birthday when the discover they're half ( insert here ) that things begin to get crazy.
C2 is a demon and a powerful one as well , they've been stalking C1 out of infatuation for years , they plan to kidnap the boy/girl and force them to become theirs.
They never lay a hand on the half human and soon C1 just gives up escaping but will they fall in love with their captor?
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