Soap?
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Thread Topic: Soap?
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I tried.))
1. A Teenage girl works in a small shop on a Snowy Mountain. She's never expected anything to happen. One day, she heads up the mountain and finds herself running from her life. A pack of wolves try to attack. She believes her life is almost over. However, A Male saves her. The male gets injured and she must take him to her cabin to heal. As she is Helping change his Bandages, she sees a Rose symbol on him. The Rose stands for Vampire. She knows this. Her mother has warned her about this. The village has been trying to find the 'Rose Master' for years. Can she love something bad? Will the village find him and kill him and Her? -
Sorry I got off before I saw this, I've been out all day. Okay sounds good, we can try it out. Can I be the girl? It seems like an easier role than the male.
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Okay. Yeah.
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Name: Brittany Holland
Gender: Female
Not immortal, human
Age: 17
Looks: long brown hair, brown eyes, tan, slim/fit
Personality: Shy, Kind, Curious (for now)
Love life: Single
She is shy but once you get to know her she is kind and caring. She wants to grow up to become a doctor or at least for now.
(I'm writing a story on quotev and this is my character so I figured it would be easier to use her instead of making a new one)
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Hold on
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Name-Flame
Age-Appears 17
Eyes- Blue. Turns red when happy or Angry
Hair- Snowy White
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Personality-Tries to be human, Awkward, Lustful, Nice
Likes- Candy and Horses
Dislikes- Humans
Other- Has snake bites -
Btw I don't know if that guy has a ponytail. If he does, just ignore it.
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Oops forgot likes and dislikes
Likes: Being alone and the mountains
Dislikes: Vampires
Other: Lives with her mother and older brother (19) -
Who would you like to go first? I make long post sometimes. So, my post could take 4-15 minutes.
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How about you start, so I could get a feel to how you soap to help make this soap better. Also you can up with the plot, starting will make it easier for me to write. I don't mind the wait, if it's good it's worth it.
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Okay. Let me start.
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I'll post a picture of Storm later.
Flame's eyes looked around from the mountain cliff. "I don't see why Master let's the pathetic beings live." He snorted. He wasn't in the best mood. Storm his younger Student, had to be taught. Flame hated this. His eyes swirled Red. "Shut the f--- up and stop complaining." Storm laughed and looked at Flame. Storm was 13. He hadn't been a vampire that long, but it's better being a vampire. He knew they both would've went to hell. -
Okay, no worries. Sorry I'll try to be on more, my little brother came over today he only comes two times a week so I spent it all with him. Also I've done several soaps and I am use to talking in the first person, is that okay? Otherwise this soap might turn out really crappy.
"Brittany can you close up for me tonight? I'm going out with my boyfriend, it's our one year anniversary!" I smile at her, giving her a hug "Of course Hannah! I'm so happy for you both! Go out have fun, don't worry about me. I'll be fine" She smiles and hands me the keys "Okay, just please be careful out here, it gets pretty creepy at night." I nod taking the keys from her, "I'll be fine, like I said, I'll call you when I get home" She gives me one last hug and heads out of the building. -
(That's storm. I don't know if the link worked.)
First person is cool.
My eye's observed the land. "Shut up Storm." I rolled my eyes and smiled. My white fangs showing. I liked the night. It wasn't completely dark yet, but close enough. Storm's hand sat on my shoulder. "Can I go back now?" He questioned me. "Yeah. Whatever." I nodded and crossed my arms. I watched him run off. Finally, I can get some piece and quiet. Storm get's on my nerves. I jumped off the cliff and landed on a piece of mountain below. -
Yes the link works, okay sounds good.
I sigh at the thought of love, does anyone really know what love actually is, I know I have no say since I haven't found love. The only people I have loved are my family members but even then, many have passed away. I look at the time to realize it's closing time, I close up and swallow hard to look out in the dark forest. I love the forest which is the main reason we live in the mountains, I always walk home from work but I have never walked home in the dark. I told my mother I was going out with a friend tonight, and she would be dropping me off afterwards. I didn't want to scare my mother knowing all the information she knows. I sigh, grabbing my bag and started my way towards my house, it's a two mile walk.
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