RP plz
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Thread Topic: RP plz
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Okay then, I will try, I gtg to bed soon, it is almost 11 PM)
Alyssa woke up and looked at Dante asleep.
She smiled and got up and got dressed and cooked some breakfeast -
oihw NewbieIt was the middle of the night 3AM everything was quiet apart the the one noise, footsteps quietly sneeking on the wooden flooring. The noise is getting closer and closer. A sudden knock knock knock on my bedroom door. I shouted nervously 'who is it?' I got no reply and then I got out of my bed and walked towards the door
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What the hell ^...)
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American Ninja NewbieDante awoke to the smell of bacon. He glanced at the clock. 5:30 it read. He went to the bathroom and splashed water on his face to wake up, he dried and put on clothes. He walked into the kitchen just as the cooking was finished. "Good morning, the food looks great." He went to the expensive coffee maker and began to make a triple shot vanilla espresso with a special ingredient known to him as early earthquake. A pretty potent formula sure to wake him up.
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Wow you lost me with the triple shot vanilla espresso and woah never heard of anything besides coffe lol... I'm not very fancy)
"good morning, Thanks" said Alyssa -
American Ninja Newbie(XD)
" Here I made you a drink too." He brought the drinks to the table with the rest of the food. "Today's the big day, first day at the new school for you, and first time at my new headquarters." He picked up the morning news and frowned at the cover article. -
"what is it?" asked Alyssa
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American Ninja Newbie"Check out this article. I think I've seen this guy before."
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oihw NewbieDante awoke to the smell of bacon. He glanced at the clock. 5:30 it read. He went to the bathroom and splashed water on his face to wake up, he dried and put on clothes.
(instead of putting on clothes before he washes his face, what is he checking out his body in the mirror or something? what a wierdo.) He walked into the kitchen just as the cooking was finished.
(great timing) "Good morning, the food looks great." He went to the expensive coffee maker -
oihw Newbiebam bam here come jaws
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Okay are you mocking what he said?)
"where do you think you saw him?" -
American Ninja NewbieWhat the hell are you doing now? Beat it!
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oihw Newbiewheres the edge of excitement, the thirill, or the drama?
nothing is happening in this story the reader is getting bored. xx -
oihw Newbiecaramell tripple shot ventre latte very posh what coffee shop was it from starbucks? or did you just make it in the kitchen in this story?
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American Ninja Newbie"This guy, he tried to buy the company. I turned down and he got really angry bout it. The guy you see, who apparently died, its his assistant who wanted to work for me but our management was full and we had no room for him. His boss apparently resented him for this. I dunno, I'll think about it later, I have to get to work." He combed his hair, brushed his teeth and showered before heading out the door. " Have a great day, see you this afternoon."
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