Thanksgiving rp
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:31pm
Thread Topic: Thanksgiving rp
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Name: Allyssa
Age: 12
Gender: female
Personality: tomboy, happy, fun
Appearance: Long dark, dark, brown hair, brown almond shaped eyes, wears sweaters and leggings (occasionally scarves.)
Other (optional): Is one of my old characters
Here's my other character:
Name: George
Age: 14
Gender: male
Personality: shy, quiet, awesome
Appearance: Brown hair, brown eyes, wears shorts and t shirts.
Other (optional): is another one of my old characters, is Allyssa's brother, and is less sensitive to the cold than Allyssa.
You can either use some of your old characters or you can make new characters. The choice is yours. -
Im using haseo and shiono, his sister. (That means haseos not guna be a jack ass)
Name:shiono
Age:16
Gender:female
Looks: realy long white hair thats braided with a rose at the end. Red-ish brown eyes. Often wears a short pale green dress with a white skirt and a lightgreen jacket Has gold bangles with emremerald leaves in them -
Name: haseo
Gender: male
Age: 18
Looks: cdn.staticneo.com/w/dothack/e/e5/Haseo_first_form.jpg -
Anyone else want to join?
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Excuse me for the rude interruption but~
You won't ever get more people in these Rps then the Newbs. Why is that sweetheart?
Well you clearly don't know how to soap or rp. I don't even remember you being taught. Why is this?
Well~
1. You don't do plots. The ones I've seen you do are way to short. A idea or plot should be atleast 8 long well detailed sentences or way more. Nobody will join threads with stupid names either. Like 'Halloween Rp' or something made up like 'Happy frog life'. It's got to interest people!
2. Your characters are to Normal. 'Tomboy' or 'fun' already been done. Also i'm pretty sure 'awesome' is not a personality. Try something different and unnatural for once. It seems much better. Your characters are Mary sues.
3. You and Phoenix both need help posting. You make them way to short. Just look~
What NOT to do- Emma blink at the snow. "Yeah?"
What TO do- Emma look at the white, puffy flakes. The air just had to be below zero for sure. Her breath came out in clouds of fog like bubbles. Her skin had goosebumps all over them. "Yeah? You know what we should go." She stated motioning the boy over. She choked on the air and started walking. But the walking was soon more sliding because of the thick layer of ice.
See doesn't that sound better? Phoenix I think your a wonderful Rp person but your post are way to short.
Please work on this and people are sure to join! -
Ok, ill try to make longer posts.
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Thank you Phoenix. I'll be glad to Rp with you again once this problem is solved. But don't just do it here, do it in every Rp!
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