The New Girl

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Thread Topic: The New Girl

• Sahara Drowned Newbie

  10 years ago
  This is about a new girl (me) and these people who be mean to her. But in the end they all become friends.
  
  I am the new girl.
  Name: peach miano
  Looks: blonde hair, violet eyes, glossy red lips, two skin, and skinny
  Wears: Red plain shirt with sport shorts. High wedges sneakers.
  Acts: shy and quiet. Doesn't have a lot of friends and actually tries to stay put of things
  Gender: female
  Age: 18 (no higher)
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  Saratheamaze Novice

  10 years ago
  Hey, you're getting better at this stuff! Try proper grammar and more plot definition.
• Sahara Drowned Newbie

  10 years ago
  ThX
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  Saratheamaze Novice

  10 years ago
  A lot more plot definition..

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