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"Nah." The sub was setting. He estimated it was about 6 am.
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*sun :P)
Ari nodded. "Okie." -
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The sub is setting. -eats sandwich-))
The birds began to squawk and raise from their nest for praying on insects and feeding their young. Braydon, who was currently disoriented from the lack of sleep looked at the birds. He jumped when he heard te sound of horses clipping on the bricked driveway of the castle. The boy ran to the fence and peaked out. The prince! "Ari!" He called out. -
xD
*preying, not praying
Sorry Grammar nazi :D)
Ari lifted up her head. "What is it?" -
Omfg not you too))
"The prince! He has te shoe too. Okay... We need to get going so we can get outta here." He opened the fence and snuck to the front yard. The prince already entered the manor. -
Sorry.
*THE *out of)
Ari nodded and walked up to the front of the house. -
I type dialogue of how my characters speak. He says outta instead of out of.))
He walked to the front of house and up the steps. From the side he peeked in. Braydon heard talking and giggling from the sisters and the mother. "Let me try it on!" "No! Me first!" -
Well yeah I do too, I was just saying)
Ari rolled her eyes and stood next to them. -
....then wtf is the point???))
The stepmother intervened. "You will go first." "Yay!" The one stepsister tried on the slipper first. When she did the slipper plopped right off of her huge feet. "Wah?! Try pushing it on! I'll fit!" She commanded. They tried again, but no avail. "My turn!" The next one tried it on. It didn't feet either.
The prince sulked. "Isn't there another in the house?" "There is but I doubt she's it." One of the girls scoffed. -
....idrk)
Ari stepped forward. "I'm here." -
Eeeexactly.))
They all gasped. Braydon stayed by the door listening in. The prince's assistant walked over to her, slipper in the pillow he held. He kneeles down and placed the shoe on the floor for her to slide her feet in to.
Sorry if I'm being b----y. Slightly pissed.)) -
Why?)
It fit perfectly. Ari did a fake gasp and then she realized: Wasn't Cinderella supposed to marry the prince? She glanced frantically at Braydon. -
Nvm it.))
Braydon took the slip of paper from earlier, out of his pocket. Oh yeah she had to marry him. The prince smiled. He ran to Ari and picked her up. "My princess! We shall get married right away! Today even!" Upon hearing that Braydon pumped his fist in the air and mouthed an "aw yeah!" Not much time needed to be wasted anymore. -
Uh ok))
Ari glared at Braydon. She wanted that weird portal thing to come out of nowhere and take her away from this, but it never came no matter how hard she wanted it to. She looked at the prince and said, "Uh sureee." -
"Fantastic! My maids will get you dazzled up right away. See you at the alter! Well spread the word!" He said before the servant by the carriage walked to Ari and dragged her to the carriage. Then the carriage drove off. Braydon walked to the Prince. "Um, where is the wedding being held?" "The church a few blocks away, young lad! Is she your sister?" Braydon hesitated to answer. "You can say that,"
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