Cavernclan
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Thread Topic: Cavernclan
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(She doesn't, instead of doesn't)
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Finchbreeze: " Go away," I growled, my voice angry. " I want to be alone. Everyone hates me. Everyone does. I have a bad temper, a messed up clan, and an empty stomach. All because of the rogues. The rogues made us like this. Just please, take Blizzardkit away," I hissed.
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^i don't see the difference o_o)
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(what.)
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(Nvm)
Badgerclaw stopped licking. "I don't hate you. I know you are gonna react as stubborn as you always do, but it's true." -
(What Rave corrected)
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Finchbreeze: " You're the only one," I muttered.
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"You know that's not true." Badgerclaw growled.
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Blizzardkit still gazed angrily at the pool.
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Finchbreeze: " Then who?" I meowed back.
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"Your kits. And a lot of other cats. They all care about you. But you don't seem to notice."
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Finchbreeze: I tried to stand, but I couldn't. " Stupid paw..." I hissed under my breath, as my chin hit the ground again.
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Blizzardkit still gazed into the pool, waiting to see Bramblestar so he could give him what's coming to him.
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Finchbreeze: " I wonder why," I said sarcasticly, rolling my eyes.
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"Lay still." Badgerclaw meowed, and he started to lick Finchbreeze's wounds.
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