Dancing In The Rain
Thread Topic: Dancing In The Rain
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I couldn't decide on a title name for the life of me @_@
"Spring Flowers, Summer Rain"
"Water The Garden"
"Don't Fade To Gray"
But I think Dancing In The Rain was the right fit -
But the
Das saD thread 🥺 -
It was too stuffed :')
1 2 5 paeges -
My friend gives me a look™ when I saw "oh shoot" or "oh dang" even though she has a speppier language >:0
Not really mad tho it's kinda funny lol
Also like?? I had a good time a while ago, playing ping pong w people and lemme tell u there is a ping pong time warp or summ -
I just straight up say
“Oh s---” -
AJSKSK LOL
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Gotta love it when you actively try not to smile much because you think your smile is ✨ugly✨
I hate it when people tell me to smile for a picture and then when I do, they say something like "Oh come on, I mean a REAL smile!" like?? I don't know how to smile and that is why I like wearing masks in pictures woo -
I want new eyeballs
Also stress, nice -
🎶And I'm tick, tick, ticking like a time bomb🎶
🎶Wonderin' where it wrong🎶
🎶And if it's 'cause of me, oh nooo🎶 -
*went wrong
RIP -
TW: Violence
Upset because my character got a little too much hate from someone else's character imho
Bubblepaw (my character) witnessed her adopted father Toadsneeze (not my character, adult)take out the eyeof her loved one, Turtle Flower (not my character, kitten) as a kitten because Turtle Flower taunted Toadsneeze, which later led to Turtle Flowerbleeding to deathfrom the injury.
Traumatised by this, Bubblepaw left her Clan because she was scared of the violent thoughts that came to her when she saw Toadsneeze, the scarring memories that were there, and the fact that Toadsneeze faced no consequences for his actions (which he regretted but still .-.)
She and Turtle Flower had been very close, and she actually left her Clan to go visit the Tribe (Turtle's home) with Turtle for a little, even though Toadsneeze disapproved of Turtle and the two's relationship in general.
Now to the present. Bubblepaw left to the Tribe, traumatised after what she has gone through, and her brother Ravenpaw (not my character, kitten) left to look for her and ended up living in the barn. Bubblepaw stays at the Tribe a little, before deciding to go looking for Ravenpaw. Nearly freezing to death on her way there, she makes it to the barn and is happy to see Ravenpaw.
But Ravenpaw lashes out at her, and I'll stop this here bc I want to find the actual quotes for it hh -
Bubblepaw padded inside, collapsing from the journey. Snow and ice was clinging to her fur as she pulled herself into a haystack, shivering.
Bubblepaw did her best to lick the ice and snow out of her fur, her body feeling numb.
So Bubblepaw traveled a distance to go see Ravenpaw, setting the scene
He [Ravenpaw] padded out the entrance. Walking somewhere
Bubblepaw's eyes lit up with recognition. "Ravenpaw?" she called out, her voice slightly hoarse.
*he perked his ear* “my 6th hallucination.” *he continued to walk and sat*
This part?? Kinda confuses me bc idk how Ravenpaw could have gotten hallucinations but alr
Bubblepaw's ears drooped. "I'm not a hallucination, Ravenpaw. I'm real."
“I’ve been waiting for you. For 5-6 days. At this barn. With barn cats.”
*he sighed* “and you come now..”
“you left me..”
“and you always do..”
“you never tell me”/[quote]
So this part ticks me off a lil'. Ravenpaw essentially guilt-trips Bubblepaw, which would be fine if that was his character, but I'm like 99% sure that wasn't what the admin was trying to do (and they actually NPCed with Ravenpaw for a long time so interactions wouldn't have been possible)
And also how the heck was she supposed to know he was at the barn?? She was at the Tribe and the two literally live in NightClan, and he's waiting for her somewhere she doesn't even know he's at
"You always leave me" um
Anyways
[quote]Bubblepaw's eyes narrowed. "I left you? I always leave you? I never left your side since the day we were born, until our fox-hearted father killed the cat I loved! Where were you when I was going through all of that heartbreak?"
"I left because I had to. I couldn't bear to see his stupid face ever again," she growled lowly.
*he growled and looked at bubble* “DO YOU CARE ABOUT THEM OR ME?!” *he hissed*
'Aight, pause. I just wanted to mention that these two are both the equivalent immature twelve year olds, which makes their emotional reactions make sense. But again, I don't think that's what the admin was going for here. I know them, and it doesn't strike me as the thing they'd do.
And let's talk about this bit a little. Ravenpaw asks Bubble "whether she cares about them (aka her loved one, Turtle, that literally DIED about a week ago) or him"
That is a MAJOR red flag. She literally loses a loved one, someone she was planning to marry in her future, and he demands whether she cares about him or the loved one she recently lost and was mourning?? Ravenpaw nooo!!
“I WAS NEVER THERE CAUSE I HAD MY OWN PROBLEMS TO DEAL WITH!”
“I NEVER HAD A LOVE LIFE! NOBODY LIKED ME!”
“YOU WERE THE ONLY ONE WHO DID-“ [Ravenpaw speaking]
*inhales* This guy-
He talks about how he has his "own problems to deal with". Like what for example?? Bubblepaw watched their dad seriously injure their loved one over a schoolyard taunt, and then saw the loved one die before her eyes and Ravenpaw rants about how he doesn't have a love life and how he had his own problems, so he couldn't have been there for his grieving sister??
But for some reason, this traumatized child is supposed to be the one supporting her brother through this. Go figure
Also Ravenpaw's character is honestly good and I like it AS A CHARACTER, but he is just...little dude, come on. Imagine going up to someone who just lost their s/o and being like "At least you had a love life, also I couldn't make it to the funeral bc I had some problems" ._.
Bubblepaw's eyes filled up with tears. "How could you say that? How dare you say that? I lost a cat I loved and all you can think about is yourself?" she hissed furiously. "I came all this way, nearly FROZE to death just to see you again and this is how you act? I never should have come!" she said, lashing her tail.
*he stopped*
“FINE! THEN LEAVE! IF YOU NEVER SHOULD HAVE COME YOU MIGHT AS WELL LEAVE ME ALONE! AND I CAN STAY BY MYSELF WITH NOBODY TO TALK TO!”
“YOU CAN LEAVE ME LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO!”
Okay so this bit.
*inhales and exhales*
He interprets her doing like, literally anything that does not involve him as her "leaving him". She literally goes off to have fun with Turtle and he's like "Welp, she always leaves me! M'kay"
First of all, he never expressed any sign of wanting to go along. Frick frackin' ever. Never showed any sign that he wasn't perfectly okay with her having fun, being a kid, and hanging out with other children.
But for the sake of the plot, we could pretend that he did ig? Idk dude
"A cat I loved was murdered, Ravenpaw!" she [Bubblepaw] spat, tears falling form her eyes. "Our own father killed them! But you obviously don't care about me one bit!"
Just a cute reminder that yeah, her own father, a cat she looked up to, killed the cat she loved dearly. While she was the mental equivalent of a 8-12 year old.
“okay, if I didn’t [care about you]”
“then I would have actually been mean to you, meaner then I am now”
“but fine, if I don’t care about you”
“I might as well go freeze myself and make my life easier.”
“I did love you. I loved you more then my heart ever would, and you cared about someone else more then me" [Ravenpaw]
This is INSANELY guilt-trippy. He threatens to literally take his own life to try to make Bubblepaw feel bad, and he also blames her for loving someone else more than him?? He's being insanely territorial over her, and also may I remind you the cat he's talking about is literally dead and Bubblepaw is grieving them.
“so what did I do? I left you be with them!”
“and you ignored me like i was NOTHING!
“I guess if I dont care about you I’ll leave you now!”
he walked off and started to burst into tears and his paws went faster [Ravenpaw]
WHAT
THE
Left seems to be a typo of "let" because it wouldn't really make sense otherwise, if he was saying he left her to be with the barn cats lol
But he LET her be with them? He LET her? I wasn't aware that she required his approval to have relationships of her own, and as I said this character was NPCed for a long time so there couldn't have been interactions between the two even if Bubble wanted too!! The admin is taking advantage of that and twisting it against Bubblepaw so they can have Ravenpaw "win" the arguement.
And he said "I guess if I don't care about you then I'll leave now". If he stayed, that would have meant he cared. If he left, that would mean he didn't care about her, per his words. And he leaves. Ayo-
Again, I actually like Ravenpaw's character somewhat because it's interesting, because he's being immature and self-centered and yeah, he's a kid, kids will do that sometimes. But the fact that their admin seems to be trying to make him come off as a perfect angel really rubs me the wrong way when he literally manipulates and guilt-trips Bubblepaw while she's grieving the death of a loved one that was caused by someone she cared for and trusted, her caretaker.
"I never ignored you! I was always there for you," she snapped. "Then fine! Leave, like you always do!" she said, wiping tears away from her eyes as she stormed away.
I rest my case. Conclusion? Bubblepaw is baby and I love her (she's immature sometimes and emotional, but she's not perfect, she's been through a ridiculous amount of trauma from being abandoned to starve as a baby to this), Ravenpaw is also an immature kid who is self-centered (but I think still has a good heart and cares for Bubblepaw in the end), and I'm not too happy with Ravenpaw's admin. -
I'm crying oh God I'm scared
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I don't know if I'm enough
I don't know if I can save them I'm so scared they're going to die -
Hey, hey, hey, it’s going to be all right. Take deep breaths, okay? 1, 2, 3, in. 1, 2, 3, out. In. Out.
Is everything okay? *hugs you*
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