Summers moon

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Thread Topic: Summers moon

• Goldlilly Novice

  12 years ago
  The first chapter and paragraphs are stupid just hang in there
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  tenten16 Novice

  12 years ago
  *hanging*
• Goldlilly Novice

  12 years ago
  Chapter one
  The house was huge. It was a mansion, my grandpa owned it a while ago. It was in Romaina,so I was flying there this exact moment. Mt grandpa died a couple weeks agoo, and we got the house. The problem was if we wanted to keep the house we had to go to Romaina. So ya, I'm bored as he'll on a plane. That's when I noticed him. About my age, thick black hair, all I needed to say was damn sexy. I stared at him about the whole plane ride.
• Goldlilly Novice

  12 years ago
  Chapter one
  The house was huge. It was a mansion, my grandpa owned it a while ago. It was in Romaina,so I was flying there this exact moment. Mt grandpa died a couple weeks agoo, and we got the house. The problem was if we wanted to keep the house we had to go to Romaina. So ya, I'm bored as he'll on a plane. That's when I noticed him. About my age, thick black hair, all I needed to say was damn sexy. I stared at him about the whole plane ride.
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  tenten16 Novice

  12 years ago
  Sounds funny, kinda cool. You gonna make a book?
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  I accidentally logged off and forgot my pass and user and yes it is going to be a book
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  I accidentally logged off and forgot my pass and user and yes it is going to be a book
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  tenten16 Novice

  12 years ago
  Oh woops! Oh, okay, cool!
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  Ya
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  The second chapter is coming
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  Chapter two
  Then I the middle of my daydream my dad put his big fathead in the way. " the ane landed".
  "what"?! I asked alarmed
  "get up "!
  I got up and looked for the boy. He was gone, my mom had died a couple weeks ago so iwas really bummed out.
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  Ambers Only Love Newbie

  12 years ago
  Not to be rude... But this is an incredibly short chapter, it's full of spelling and punctuation errors, and parts of it don't really seem to connect at all..
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  Ok well I told people that the first chapters would suck
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  Ambers Only Love Newbie

  12 years ago
  But this isn't really...
  
  *shakes head*
  
  Nevermind. Just keep going.. I'm sorry for my rude outburst.
• Goldwolflilly Newbie

  12 years ago
  Its ok I would have said the same thing

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