Guys...need opinions....NOW!
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Thread Topic: Guys...need opinions....NOW!
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Buzz Lightyear, one of the Top Ten Cops of Star Command. He has joined Star Command to protect the universe from the Evil Emperor Zurg, whom had revealed to him who his true father is. The thought replays in his head over and over again, sending chills down his spine every time. But he had to think of the problem he's dealing with nowsomeone known as "Temptress". Buzz clenched his fists at the thought of her"She will pay" he mumbles under his breath remembering the first time he saw her. A tall beautiful womanporcelain skin, scarlet red hair, and the most beautiful green eyes he has ever seen! Of course this isn't what Buzz expected, he expected a lady who wore a lot of make-up that made her look like plastic and somehow seduced menthis young woman didn't even have a smudge of make-up on and yet she looked stunning! Buzz didn't realize who she was until she shot at him. Missing his face at about three inches. "Well..." says the female with her southern accent "You maybe a little fella...but you a cute little fella too. Too bad you work for Star Command" and with that she points her gun at him again. Buzz this time dodges the bullet right before it hit him. Thats when he realized...she was the one whom he was after. His awe turned into rage. He quickly got up and shot his laser at her, but it was too late...she was gone...
He went to his room and took a shower, after one long hour of peace and quiet in the bathroom, he got dressed in black sweat pants and a tight t-shirt. He runs his fingers through his shoulder-lenght shaggy hair, which was brunette with blond streaks in the front. Just then there was a knock on the door..."Come in" says Buzz standing up. The door opened and the tall young lady was greeted by Buzz with a warm welcome "Mira, its good to see you again" he says "Same here...how've you been?" asks Mira "Terrible" he says sitting on his bed "What's wrong?" she asks sitting next to him "Its nothing really...just stress from this mission and all" says Buzz running his fingers through his hair again "Buzz...you and I are like brother and sister...you can tell me anything" Buzz sighed and sat up..."Its this woman...this...this...Temptress...she's always in my thoughts...and every time that thought rings in my head over and over..." He pauses then mumbles "And at every thought...i would fall in love with her more and more"...Did he really just say that?...he cursed at himself for saying such a thing! "What?" asks Mira not understanding the last part he said..."I said I would almost loose my temper!" he shouts. Mira is shocked at his behavior..."Buzz calm down! We will capture her, she will be our prisoner and then you won't have to worry about a thing. But before that happens, you need to control yourself...I hate to say this...but it seems as if...she has...well...sedu-" "SHE DID NOT SEDUCE ME!" shouts Buzz cutting Mira off. He had really scared her...Buzz himself was shocked at what he said...he wanted to apologise but without saying a word...Mira left. After a while...Buzz calmed down and replayed what Mira was trying to say in his head...and at that moment...he wasn't sure anymore...was he seduced?
yeah yeah yeah its Toy Story...gotta problem with that?? -
okkkkkkkk no opinions......-_-
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That was new, I like it.
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thanks
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wow thats pretty cool story
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Cool :D
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thanks yall
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