The Abyss
- Locked by Mused Jade on Apr 8, '24 12:58pmReason: Owner's Request
Thread Topic: The Abyss
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Ok I’m up to writing chapter 5 but I need feedback and I’m hella not asking anyone in my family
I feel like I’ve moved too quickly and it needs more explanation or sum
Like how much “normality” did it last for Percy in camp halfblood. Like two chapters at least. In chapter 4 Joi is like stuck at the circus and can’t get out then in chapter 5 enter Thorn??? Idk man I feel like I need to establish a kind of routine before moving so quickly??
To understand you’ll need to read it lmao, just ignore my ranting and look at that pic of Lafayette -
And I don’t wanna continue writing because what if I have to delete it or sum
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Oooo cool. I feel that, where like, the pacing seems off?
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Yeah, like things are moving too fast because you’re only 26 f---ing pages in
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I mean, Chronicals of Narnia was only like, 100 pages. I would say to just write it, and then edit and stretch out little scenes as they become more important to the story,
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That’s true. 26 pages into Narnia they were already trying to stop the villain 🤣 Thx, I’ll keep that in mind
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Exactly! Not every book is a bajillion pages lmfao
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Lol fair enough
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I wanna practice my clarinet but I'm too lazy to print out the sheet music I'm supposed to be practising
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My friend knows the gravity falls theme song on the piano and she forever got it in my head
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Fair
Omg yessss -
Lmfao it’s still stuck in my head along with Greedy by Tate McRae
And this is the same friend who has me in her phone as Alexi Lovegood with a Ravenclaw pfp lmao -
Yessss slay
That’s your name now. There’s no changing it. -
Like permanently it’s not leaving
Lmfao ok 🤣 I mean I don’t have a problem with that xD -
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Slayyyy lol
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