share some old cringy stories you wrote
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Thread Topic: share some old cringy stories you wrote
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I'm brycen, and I died.
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*kicks my pile of trash stories into a corner* You saw nothing
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let me share one with you
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its about vampires. of course.
Bloodmates: Book One (bloodmates? thats gross little brooke)
Introduction:
It was 1920...The age of vampires... (mmm i dont think 1920 was the age of vampires but okay)
There were two friends, Eli and Mary. Two kids, Eli was a brown haired girl, while Mary was a red haired girl. They were both 13, however EVERYBODY was scared of vampires, and every few nights someone would die,(jeez little brooke that's a little weird to add in) but no one in Eli and Mary's family. They wondered to themselves, "Is that the vampire?" But they couldn't be detectives cause their moms don't want them to, but they do a little "detectiving" every once in a while.
(i dont think detectiving is a word, little brooke.)
1: ELI AND MARY, DETECTIVES!
"I think that Cassie is the vampire, don't you Eli?" "It is possible!" Mary said. "Nah, Cassie's too nice, but she could be wearing a cover!" Eli replied. "WAIT! I think she's showing signs of being a VAMPIRE!" "SEE! She has her tounge in her cheek! She could be licking off spare blood!" (PFFFHDJDRJE WHAT) Eli yelped to Mary, Eli then took a picture of her.
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The very next day, Eli went to the hospital, cause she had been bitten by a vampire. They rushed to the hospital before it was too late, and while she was being brought to the hospital, she slowly was growing vampire fangs. She had to have her mouth taped shut (oh lord little brooke what were you watching to give you this idea) so she wouldn't bite anyone. The doctor gave the mom some pills to give Eli so she wouldn't turn into a vampire again.
Later while the mom was crushing up the pill to put in Eli's applesauce (my mom actually crushed up pills i needed in my applesauce so this is based off of a real experience) to give to Eli, the mom said "You know, I bet it's that no good Mary. She's cuckoo!" (wow you didn't have to insult her like that) "I don't think you should hang out with her anymore!" "...Or at least for a while." She said. "HMPH! FINE!!!" Eli yelped at her. "Honestly, I don't think I even want to take this pill!" Eli said. "Hmm, you look a little paler- Are you a vampire?" (i think the answer is obvious) mom said. Eli hissed at her and turned into a bat and flew around as mom chased her. "Okay, I guess I wont give you this blood!" Mom dissolved the pill into some fruit punch. Eli then turned into a human and drank it. "Hey...This is just fruit punch with a pill in it!" Eli yelped as she turned human again. "Sorry about that mom." Mom then said "I also got bit by a vampire once, so I know how that is." "Heh, my parents were so bad at getting me to take the pill, and I felt bad cause they were so pathetic, I just took the pills cause I couldn't bear to see them be so pathetic."
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Later that day...
(i cant include this part cause its really creepy so ill just kinda give you the idea)
(cassie, the girl from earlier is accused of being a vampire by the mayor and everyone in town is watching what the mayor has to say and her mom is there and cassie is really scared but the mayor is weird so she kills her
it was actually really brutal what kind of youtube videos were i watching?)
2: ELI IN BLACK!
The next day, Mary had to take a vacation to Hawaii. Without Eli. Eli sadly had to stay in the small, but great, -the city i live in-
Then, at midnight, Eli said to her mom, "I'm gonna go on a walk with Brazil!" (prob her dog idk) "Okay, but be quick!" Replied her mom. Eli walked outside and said "I'm actually exploring..." under her breath. She saw tulips and pink roses. -
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Then suddenly, CHOMP! "HEY! Who bit m-" SMACK! "hhheyy mary... i didnt know you were left h-handedd..." Eli said as she passed out.
Eli then woke up in Mary's room, tied up. "Mary? W-What's going on?!" Eli said. "You want the truth!" Mary replied. "well duh" Eli said. "I'm a vampire, and I thought you were an animal so I bit you and I tried to knock you out so you wouldn't remember I bit you! But my point is...
DON'T LET THEM KILL ME!" Mary said. "Well, I-- Woah, no... MY PILLS! I'M GONNA BE A VAMPIRE! Oh wait, I can't make you a vampire, since you already are one." "Also, I'm kinda rough when I'm a vampire." Eli said. "That's fine." Mary replied. "Also, can I have some blood?" Eli asked. "Yep!" Mary said as she handed Eli some blood. "This tastes weird." Eli said. "It's normal A- blood." Mary replied. "Wait... SOMEONE PUT GARLIC IN HERE! WE NEED MILK!" Mary yelled. They then both drank some milk so they wouldn't die from the garlic. "Hey, look Eli! An orange moon!" Mary said. "Oh yeah! I gotta get home! See ya, Mary!" Eli said as she rushed home. They then both went to bed.
The End.
lol put some ratings in here maybe -
I can't share
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I have so many, but they are all stored on Wattpad and I'm not copy n pasting.
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Im not saying
*hides all the cringe stories that r on my profile*
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