hm
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Thread Topic: hm
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Ill proofread
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I don't trust you 👀
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Why not :(
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I took out my teacher's name. not that it would really matter but just so you know I didn't forget it on the cover page
and I didn't put my first name but my teacher understands why and I won't be counted off for it -
so the entire paper including the works cited, cover page, and outline comes to a length of 11 pages but I promise the actual paper is only 6 pages long so it isn't that bad
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Okay so you were right i shouldnt have been the one to do it.
But i did read all of it so this is what i got.
For the most part its basically an english teachers wet dream, however occasionally you have some repetitious statements. Mainly in your thesis you state your reasonings and then you say the exact same thing in your body paragraphs. While I know thats on purpose, it can sound a little boring, so maybe just try to reword it a bit so it sounds less repetitious. Only other thing I found was whenever you say women writers, it kinda ruins the flow so maybe just change women to female writers, keeps away that pesky alliteration.
Other then that its all pretty goof
Goof
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Okay, thank you for reading it! I'll take your advice on the wording of women writers, but I'll probably leave the rest because the thought of rewriting all that stuff makes me want to blow my brains out
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I didnt mean the whole paragraph, mainly just that first intro sentence
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Ah okay, that makes more sense. Thanks again!
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Yer welcome
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I'm good at everything in school except socializing
why am I so bad at it
it's not like I don't try. I do. it just never clicks. is there something wrong with me or am I just stupid? -
I am going to bring these cookies to my class and they are going to like them or else I will openly sob
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Can't be worse than what a kid down in Orlando, Florida did their cookies that they brought into their classroom apparently they made the cookies out of their grandmother's ashes, look out pepperidge farms, you got to competition lol
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I did not do anything weird to the cookies but being the creepy quiet kid I'm sure they will all be suspicious
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Tarara tara tara...
My lady boku ni misas---e okure yo kyou mo kimi wo yume ni
My honey boku ni nando mo nando mo iwas---e kure I'm lovin'
Sos---e zenbu uketome kimi no moto e niji no hashi wo kakeru
Mata kon'ya mo aeru to ii na
Kimi ga iru to mainichi ga tanoshii sara ni sasuga no boku mo katanashi
Shigoto mo asobi mo benkyou mo hey yo itsumo yori isso enjoy yo
Anata wa koi s---emasu ne
Maji de sokka kore ga koi na no katte maji de
Majime ni kimi no subete suki sokora no aidoru moderu yori mo ii
Takaku mo hikuku mo nai kimi no se mo me mo te mo kami no nioi mo
Sos---e nani ijou ni issho ni itai
Hoka wa nani mo iranai yo isshougai
Oto mo mellow boku mo melo-melo tsukisasu shisen choito hello hello
Noroke torokesou na hodo no hanasenai hanasanai yo hold on
literally the entire time I was taking my test this song was playing in my head
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