~Official Thread~
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Thread Topic: ~Official Thread~
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Somebody plz
Proof read before I send it to him -
Page before this one S_N :3
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First paragraph-
-It is "You're" not "Your"
Third paragraph-
-Change the tenth word "If" to the word "Of."
-Change the 50'th word in the third paragraph from "gave" to "Have."
Fourth paragraph-
- Fifth word from "That" to "Thank."
- Change the 11th and 12th words from "U" and "Was" to "You were."
- Change the "3" to "Three" on the 18th word.
- Period "." at the end of the fourth paragraph.
That's all the mistakes I caught. I could have missed some, however- It all looks good.
You're welcome~
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(Edited :3 Thank you so much)
Dear Panda,
I won't say this is going to be the last letter you're going to get from me like this, but it might be a while, because I don't want to keep bombarding you with these. :3
I love talking to you. I know sometimes when we call, I might not talk, but I just like the feeling of having someone there who has time for me. Someone who will talk to me when I'm ecstatically happy, very weird or just flat out in tears. I love how you have a sense of humor for almost anything, and that you can turn anything I say around. (Regardless of what I say at the time, I find it hilarious xD).
As I write this, I can't help but think of how much I appreciate you and what you've done to help me so far. I truly don't know what I would do without you. As you read this, you're probably
going to say you're speechless, and that's okay. You have shown me how much you have loved me already, and I don't think I could ever exceed that amount.
I want to say thank you for being there when I as scared and we called at three in the morning. It meant so much to me, and then I wasn't scared anymore. I love you so much and I never want to lose you.
Love,
Draggo -
I sent it to him
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You're welcome!
Alas! I caught one more grammar mistake. Sneaky little one. Hah.
Fourth paragraph-
- 12th word from "as" to "was."
There! After that, should be perfect to send to him. He'll love it! I guarantee. :) -
I changed it :3
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Good. Is it sent??
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He's typing 030
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Oh the suspense!
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I love you so much, I can't stand not being with you, you make my m days better and I can't thank you enough for being with me all this time. You put up with my ridiculousness everyday for three months. I love you so much, and I can't stop saying it. I want to be with you so much I'm ready to marry you as soon as we can.
Squeeee -
My soul has been blessed
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"Yea though I walk through the shadow of the valley of death, I will fear no evil".
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SG: Ah, Psalm 24 if I'm thinking correctly
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Glad to see you happy, Jinx.
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