does someone want to read something and tell me if
- Locked due to inactivity on Jun 16, '17 3:54am
Thread Topic: does someone want to read something and tell me if
-
I need emails to send it bc I don't want to post my stuff her 'cause I don't like getting bullied :c
-
and what i mean by that is
if you were to take all the names and pronouns out, could you tell that they are different people -
I got this
-
Email?
-
turnercj10@ gmail.com
-
aight lemme send it
-
just clicked send
-
Yoi Morgan Novice
-
I got it, and I really like how you have two people dealing with the same experience, but they are having too completely different perspectives and mindsets. So yeah you did well with the separation between the two people.
As I was reading, I did notice a few typos though.
Also
" It felt wrong, like seeing your best friend kiss your brother. Or seeing your best friend kiss your grandmother, rather."
Best line^ -
started to away from the so he was why he has not so he all night long at his
This thread is locked, therefore no new posts can be made.
