Make Your Own Adventure
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Thread Topic: Make Your Own Adventure
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Okay, so this is just an idea I wanted to try out so just bear with me. I'll start a story, then you add on to it (It MUST be appropriate and suit the previous happenings! ex. Sally went for a walk in the park-Sally hated parks, she preferred the indoors.) Alright, here is the beginning: (Note: This is fantasy and it takes place in a magical medieval land called Aluut)
Gwen stared out the frost covered window. It was late December already and the king had not yet returned. She supposed she should be patient, as war was a time consuming hobby, and one she knew little of, so why should she criticize? She was a lady, and a fine one too. Miguel would arrive in the spring and the two would be wed. 'And' she thought with a slight twirl of her hair (long and black) 'Then he shall make me a lady for real.' Miguel was one of the lords at the castle, and he had gone of to fight Slalamna, along with the rest of the men. Gwen sighed out the glass. Horsemen, messengers, she knew, were galloping at high speed towards the city. She waited patiently for their arrival and their message. But she wished she had never known: "Lady Gwendolyn." the messenger's voice boomed "The war party...."
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Jeez people! Please continue this! :(
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umm i'll give it a shot not really good but i'll try....
has won and will return in one week" Now i shall wed as soon as possible! cried Gwen happily. The week passed and Miguel came home to her and they wed a day later. And they lived happily ever after!
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Sure. The point of it was to have others add on to the story and all that but nice! (I was thinking Miguel died. Mwahaha)
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hey i was thinking that to! but i didnt no how to continue it so i went with the survival thing.
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:D Okay, so I think I'll start again....Same land, different character.
Katrina drew her bow in slightly. The majestic wind blew through her hair and she smiled. Everything was perfect, the war was going as planned and her army was dominating the field. She just needed to kill King Zamaroth, and then her victory would be secured. She pulled back the string some more and then...she plucked it! The arrow soared through the air, landing dead centre in King Zamaroth's chest. She lifted her bow in the air and cried out with glee! The King was dead! She had killed him! Now she was Queen! And all would hail to her! Loyal subjects flocked around her as she led them home to their wives waiting eagerly at home. "Well done men!" She told them "We have-"
"Princess Katrina!" a Lord cried "What are you doing with that stick!"
Katrina looked up and gasped. The scene of the battle, a figment of her imagination and hopes, had vanished. Instead of a noble steed that she rode upon, she was standing. A twig of rough wood that she held in her hands was in the place of her elm bow. "I-I" she protested weakly
"A woman of your position does not carry sticks!" the Lord Chimton spat, pronouncing the last word as if it were a curse "I expected better of you! What would your father, His Majesty! say?"
"Oh, I- I was simply going to use it on one of my servants!" Katrina lied quickly. She knew the Lord Chimpton would never object to cruelty, especially on servants. "One of my maids was late to her duties today. I couldn't find anyone else do carry out the deed." she hung her head regretfully
"Well, in that case," Lord Chimpton said "Let me-
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-take away your weapon! and if you ever use anything to harm anyone...." and with that he stormed of into the Castle and so did Katrina. She was sad that she didnt get to use her bow but she would have to get used to it....
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good...kind of wondering if you read the part about Lord Chimpton. He LOVES violence...so..........yeah.
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