Stay and keep us company!
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Thread Topic: Stay and keep us company!
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ok,
my fantasy chronical like this
The history of a world named, Radze is mapped out by plights and wars rather then dates and years. There are many such battles, famines, plagues, and natural disasters that achieved a place in history and many stories sprang from each one. Some were true; others were not so accurate, while still others were just fairytales filled with fantastical creatures, heroes, romance, and plots. But some, not many, but some of these ancient occurrences were so magnificent, so awesome, that they became legend. Passed down from generation to generation while losing none of there truth, because the story is already so powerful that the tellers of the story would be ashamed to change even one detail. The story I have to tell is one of the few legends filled with splendor, yet every bit as truthful as the first scribes wrote. It starts with…Fire!
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Wow, LOL, I like the disrciption, you're pretty good!
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the story is about a group of people who are bound and determined to liberate these people called the atonns. but the deeper in the story you get the more you start to realize that it's more about these two mages then the people you were the main characters. it's really more about the culture and speicies of an entirely different world.
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lols thanks
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OK, for my age, it's complicated but it sounds good, be sure to make it very detailed or then it will go crappy. It sounds pretty good. ^_^
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lol, thanks for the tip,
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Your welcome, it's important to put details in because it helps the reader imagine it better.
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right. i love detail. but not to much detail because reader only have about a 20-25 second attention span, and it sometimes losses them
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Yeah, but when you have an imaginative book like that. You really need to show them how it is.
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right :D thanks for listening
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No problem. You did the same, right? ^_^
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^.^
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I gtg now, see ya'
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