Cody's Thread
Thread Topic: Cody's Thread
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Same thing as usual, my fellow classmates.
Yours? -
Parents and classmates.
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My parents are having troubles at home. I tend to ignore them. I'm usually either outside or in my room playing my game.
I hate this school, I've said it before. -
I hate my school to.
My parents have the technology me and my sister don't. -
Yeah.
Oh. -
Yep. XD
*mew*
Uh oh the kittens followed me again. -
*put milk into bowl* here.
May I ask for an opinion? -
Sure
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What do you think of this song I wrote? How can I improve it?
On a lonely night in October
A man lived, all alone.
He had no family left to care for
All he had was himself.
Now on this one day his life changed
See king is believing but he did not believe.
What he saw in the distance
Fall onto the ground afar.
Chorus:
What is this? Where'd it come from?
Fallen from above it has been
Fallen from heaven, above.
He walked out in its general direction
And upon the ground it lay.
A woman dressed in white in full
She rose up to her feet alone.
What you be? Inquired he.
Angel of heaven have I been sent.
By his grace good lord to help you young man.
By his grace I serve thee.
Chorus:What is this? Where'd it come from?
Fallen from above it has been
Fallen from heaven, above. -
I think it's great. But waht about the other verses?
that's all just make more verses. -
I ran out of what to say.
Thanks.
I'll be a bit slow posting now. -
No problem
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Taking notes.
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OK
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Got a song stick in my head.
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