Cody's Thread
Thread Topic: Cody's Thread
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Can't .unless my brother gets it.
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Care bear : i am fine
Cody : clear the sky, 94 coins -
Nature: what??
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It is the name of a game. Constellation, i got 345 points
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OK nature.have fun.
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265
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care_bear19 NoviceCody: Drats. Well if you ever get the chance they're good.
Nature: That's good -
Will do
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I'll be on and off at random hours throughout the day today.
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Hi.
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Are you there?
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An idea I have:
In the land of___, there was a strong man who ruled over the land. He tried to make the perfect world for his daughter to rule over when he dies. However, one day the man is diagnosed with a serious illness unheard of in the land.
The man thinks quickly and calls upon his most intelligent men within the land to make a large group of cyborgs(half human, half robot) people to help his daughter when he dies.
The man dies within the year and his daughter takes over as ruler of the land of___. The cyborgs helped maintain the peace in the lands and rarely malfunctioned. The daughter decides to build on the cyborgs and make more stronger cyborgs to protect the land from the evils surrounding the land.
After a year the cyborgs are great in number and enhanced greatly in abilities. They can fly, have built in weapons, and can shoot fire from canisters on their backpacks out their hands.among other things.
One day, an electric circuit runs through the land and causes the cyborgs to revolt against the land and begin attacking innocent people without reason. The population crumbles as the cyborgs kill the people.
After another year the daughter calls upon the scientists to develop a way to stop the cyborgs from killing innocents. They said to her that they had developed weapons over the years including: Energy Swords, plasma pistols, and EMPs to use against the cyborgs.
The daughter calls upon a small force to help fight the cyborgs and regain control of the lands.
The group consisted of 4-6 people including herself. One of the members is a scientist, one is the daughter, one is her friend___, and another is a rival of hers. The other two are optional.
Will the group be able to regain control of the land from the rebel cyborgs? Or will they die trying or in each others hands?
This is just an idea I have, I like it but it could be improved I know. If possible could you tell me if it sounds interesting and provide ways to make it better if I ever used it. What is your opinion on it? -
Sorry Kiersten, I was typing that up.
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Is that a bit much?
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Yeah...
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