My OFFICIAL thread
Thread Topic: My OFFICIAL thread
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Right
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I had an awful dream last night.
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Hypernova NewbieYep, poem from interstellar!
Or maybe I feel...ugh idk
no, yes
okayish
answer what? -
Of?
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The movie?
You don't want to know what I think of that response.
One moment...... -
I don't remember exactly, just that it was awful. All I remember is a ship, an insane lady with knives, and a feeling of being rushed.
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Alek, you've seen Interstellar? I haven't yet. How was it, in your opinion?
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Death and sorrow so weak and bare,
Tis like aether, numb to the snare
Roly the sweet, yet sour dough,
Churning ashes silent, low
No more! Death has had its last rimiss,
I shall fill each cup with an golden bliss
That removes each gravestone,
That severs life abundant
This is what he has shown,
My heart, so arrogant,
and killed the strife
if I might give life,
That is my good poem.
,My reflection smiles back at me, though it's eyes are hollow searching mine for doubt and anguish. Doubt, despair, both of which are common emotions I feel, the not knowing if someone is smiling at me as I reflect my image upon this mirror in my oblong dorm room is like a dog gnawing at my soul conflicting numbing pain. I need to know.
"Hello? Mom? Syd'? Are you there?" My voice is dry, and the fear that is perched on my tongue flys with it.
No response.
I am alone, maybe.
I turn away from my twin that stands taller than I and pace myself to our family washroom. My posture has always been dull, I can't stand tall if i cannot see the whole picture.
Our washroom is coloured with a dull green complemented with a rose trim. The colors are drought of emotion and remind me of our speckled vision.
I slip on a gray tunic and some jeans.
The scent of marigolds mixed with sweet syrup welcomes me downstairs where my parents and older sister are eating honey pancakes and tiny cubes of fruit.
It kills me that I can't see my sister or my mother.
"Hello sweetheart," the shart voice belonged to my dad.
"Hi daddy,"
"What is wrong, Abigail?"
"The usual,"
He smiles warmly and moves to where I stand under the stairwell.
"Don't worry, it is normal"
"But that doesn't mean make me feel better. I still lust a full vision."
"That isn't possible,"
"I don't care."
I feel an unseen arm go around my shoulders, Sydnie.
"Hi Syd'"
"Hey, "
"I had better get going if I want to make it to the tram."
I rush out the door without waiting for them to respond, I don't really care to hear what they will say anyways.
I slip a tiny devise that allows others to sense my presence on the hem of my tunic and sprint down the tattered lane. The sensation I feel from the rush and the sound of foreign beepers keeps me sane for a few moments.
My body is suddenly bounced back by an objects that I can inevitably see, Remy.
"Remy! I am so glad I found you!"
"You found me! More like I found you," she remarks sarcastically
"Right, but how do I know you can even see me?"
"Because first of all, I can describe your appearance and second of all, because I say so. How do I know that you can see me?"
"I have no idea."
She laughs,
The tram rushes past us and without second thought, both of us sprint towards it. The tram only remains stationary for thirty seconds so we cannot be a moment behind it.
I waste, a surge of adrenaline to catch it not waiting to see if my friend is behind me.
I run to a stop as I near the tram stop in our desolate city. The doors of the tram open wide with a hiss. I approach the---
That is the rough draft of what I have written so far, I got sort of sloppy and less descriptive as I wrote so I need to redo it. -
Creepy much.
Wow, I have written more than I thought I did. -
Hypernova NewbieYeah my dad rented it a few days ago even. Its pretty fuqin good, better even than Gravity!
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Dude, I want to watch the movie so bad.
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Hypernova Newbie._.
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Hypernova NewbieYeah, you should at some point
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Nevermind, I want to read the book.
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I doubt you would read it all, but for the most part what did you think?
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