Lone's thread.
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Thread Topic: Lone's thread.
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How am I supposed to do that? xP
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I guess you could read the parts I have so far. Then write down any ideas you have the tell them to me whenever
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Sure. How 'bout you post it in the Library?
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*about. No internet slang from me.
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Just go to my profile. It's the summer I found love
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I just read them. Okie~
I'm gonna be honest here. Don't get offended, you asked me to help.
You definitely did a good job on the guys, having all of the guys be there and asking the MC (you, me, whatever) on dates in quick succession. But, you need to worm on grammar. Use punctuation, capitalization, and try not to rush things. Take your time; put effort into it. Watch for run-on sentences and homophones.
As for ideas: I don't know, I'm not been good at making decisions. But maybe having the boys get into a fight over the MC or something? -
waltzes in unnoticed -
tackles ashley oh snap you were noticed -
oh f---ly f--- i was noticed oh well is tackled -
evil laugh and cuddles -
awkward whale noises and snuggles -
awkward narwhale noises and huggles -
How are you? X3
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distressed cat sounds and cuddles -
Okay. You? ^-^
comforting cow noise and huggle cuddles*
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