HEY, LET'S WRIGHT A SONG, EVERYONE!
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Thread Topic: HEY, LET'S WRIGHT A SONG, EVERYONE!
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ShadowWolf9 NewbieOh, I know you don't know me....
I wish you really did....
I see you walking in the hallway,
with your funny friends.
You look my way but Im already out of sight
Oh, why did I do that?
Too bad... he'll never know me anyways! -
Okay, I can't tell if people are actually trying to wright the song.
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I am!!
Should it be me who dies?
I don't know anymore.
Go get out.
JUST FUKING DIE. -
Why do I even bother? all you do is lie
I do all I can, but all I can do is try
So just f---ing die
(guitar solo)
I cut my blood, it's savage
Dripping of the red
I watch it roll on the floor
Beneath your bed
Your hand hangs lifeless
This murderous decay
All you need is to f---ing die
To see the shame
And feel the pain
The merderous decay
All you need is to f---ing die
Hold the machete
and cut it deep to dig out the pain
So you can just f---ing die -
Sorry, I made a few changes to make it flow better.
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Leave it behind
The pain inside
Will only slow your demise -
Say your good byes
And be ready to fly
You will f---ing die -
Chorus:
You've been living a lie
Falling inside
Leaving the world of the live
Only to die
If you'd only try
You might not die
Falling behind
It's not a crime
if you would only just
f---ing DIE!
JUST f---ING DIE! -
Anyone want to throw in some ideas?
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Try adding deeper meaning? **I'm such a b---- right now**
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"I cut blood in Savage"
"Dripping of the red"
"I look it roll on the floor"
"Underneath your bed"
"Your hand hanging lifeless"
"The murderous decay"
"See the shame"
"ALL I NEED TO DO IS f---ING DIE"
"Needless to say"
"to skip in a heartbeat"
"Hold a machete"
"I see the guns"
"Don't do this, you have so much to live for"
"Even If I try"
"Even I wanted to do"
I wrote this by myself -
I've been betrayed,
I'll lead the raid
You stole all that was mine
Now I'll steel your life
Out like a light
Our love to ignite
The hate that will fall
Upon you this day
Your body to decay
Now just f---ing die
(chorus) -
Chorus:
You've been living a lie
Falling inside
Leaving the world of the live
Only to die
If you'd only just tried
You would not have lied
It's not a crime
But still you must die
JUST f---ING DIE!
Why do I even try, all you do is lie
I do all I can, but all I can do is try
So just f---ing die
(chorus)
Dripping of red
Your hand hangs dead
The murderous decay
You will die this day
To see the shame
And feel the pain
Now just f---ing die
(chorus)
Hold the knife
Cut it deep to dig out the pain
So you can just f---ing die
(guitar solo)
Leave it behind
The pain inside
Will only slow your demise
Say your good byes
And be ready to fly
You will f---ing die -
Hey, guys, a few other people and I wrote a song, come look at it! Tell me what you think!
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