soap????????
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Thread Topic: soap????????
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"Oh, i see," Jill nodded. The words suddenly hit her. "Wait what? 5 lives? That's amazing!" The words "Don't sound much like a friend to me," slipped past her mind.
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Jill sat up. "Mkay, I'll just text marissa then...." She got her phone out.
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Jill walked out of the hospital, to marissa's car. She got in, and closed the door. Marissa stared. "What was that all about? And, did you see the guy on the news? He saved 5 people in the fire!" Jill smiled. "No, he saved 6. Me."
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Marissa nodded. "Wow." They both got to the house. Marissa went to bed. Jill decided to take a walk to the meadow, knowing carter wouldn't be there. She was still worried about him.
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(O_O ok but make sure he doesn't actaully get brainwashed.)
Jill slowly walked to the meadow. Wait, carter was gone. This was the perfect oppurtunity for her to look in the tree house. -
(so...he's not getting brainwashed? k good.)
She jumped across the low tide river, and walked to the tree house. The grass around it was still stained from her blood. She cringed and walked up the ladder. -
She gasped. Knives lines the wall. Clothes and a blanket were in the corner, and a note. She read it. "5 torren boulevard, in the woods. The old shoe factory. It's where dani keeps em. Don't forget, carter." She sat down, trying to put the words together.
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She put a hand to her forehead. What did he mean by....where dani keeps THEM? Who? Why? She was too confused.
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Her phone lit up. Jill held it to the page. There was some kind of secret message. Like a glossary of some soft. "Dani- My brother, the hellraiser. He brainwashes and tortures the children. Don't let him take me to the shoelace factory. The shoe Factory- AKA the base (?) where he keeps the kids. Don't let him put me in the torture box. If he takes me anywhere, it's to the shoe factory. Don't let him. Fight him. And DO NOT.....let him put his hands on jill."
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Jill sat in a state of confusison. Should she go to the factory? Should she call the police? No, no...that would make it worse. It would make enemies, and the urge to get revenge. Was dani- the bad guy?
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All these thoughts swirled around in her mind. She had no idea what to do. Should she go? If she didn't, would they come find her? Jill walked back to the meadow.
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(How about dani kidnapps jill??)
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(mkay)
Jill walked halfway across the meadow when she heard a familiar voice. "You. Jill. You're coming with me." An arm wrapped around her. She gasped as she recognized the voice. It was dani. (can you play him?) -
(yea, k bai)
"f---." She muttered. This was all her fault. All of it. She should of never approached carter. She should of ignored him. She should of just let him go. She should of said no to coming on the trip. She could of prevented all of this. But she f---ed up again. Her father was right. he was a mistake. She never should have been born. -
(your turn)
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