I made a song

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Thread Topic: I made a song

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  SilverTree Novice

  12 years ago
  Its Called
  Fall in love with me again!
  
  Oh baby, baby!
  Oh hIm, hIm!
  I must confess,
  I still believe (still believe),
  That my heart is true!
  Give me a sign,
  Fall in love with me Im one more time!
  
  Oh baby, baby!
  Oh You, You!
  I'm addicted to you.
  Don't you know that you're mild!
  And I love what you do.
  Don't you know that you're mild!
  
  Oh baby, baby!
  Oh , !
  I think I did it again,
  I made you believe that I'm not going to attack you,
  Oh !
  To listen to music like that is just so typically me.
  Oh baby, baby!
  
  Shoot!.. I did it again!
  I wrote a song!
  
  Oh baby, baby!
  Oh , !
  I think I made you believe that the ink is black.
  Shoot!.. You think that the ink is black.
  
  Oh baby, baby!
  I'm not that delightful!
  You see my problem is this,
  I played with your heart,
  Wishing that I could find my soulmate.
  
  Oh baby, baby!
  Oh hIm, hIm!
  Oh You, You!
  Oh baby ,!
  Oh Baby,!
  I must confess,
  I still believe (still believe),
  That my heart is true!
  Give me a sign,
  Fall in love with me Im one more time!
• rascal1178 Experienced

  12 years ago
  It's awesome! Do you ever play the songs you write?
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  SilverTree Novice

  12 years ago
  IM not a good singer,my friends sing though. I make songs for them in exancge for money or something else.
• rascal1178 Experienced

  12 years ago
  Do your friends make YouTube videos where they sing them or something?
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  SilverTree Novice

  12 years ago
  No but they do it for the talent show.
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  shinedownlover Novice

  12 years ago
  this reminds me of Britney Spears song oops i did it again...
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  Rockstar123 Experienced

  12 years ago
  Omg same !
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  OZZYIOMMI Senior

  12 years ago
  It's corny.
• twitterfan Newbie

  12 years ago
  I'm also a song writer. Follow me on twitter and you can listen to some of my songs! @red4nchors_
  Also follow my best friend, @jorigill_
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  Sage Parson Novice

  12 years ago
  I wrote a song for a friend once. Its pretty good, but at the same time...it NEEDS something!!
  
  Great Song BTW!! And I like how honest you are about singing!!
  
  I HATE it when people say that they're good singers, but they're not. Or others say that they need work on their voice and they just deny it and continue to sound bad.
  
  You should create a melody for that neat song!! :) KEEP IT UP!!

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