Daydreaming about you
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Thread Topic: Daydreaming about you
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I close my eyes
And all the memories
They come flooding back to me
Hate know
That you were leaving me
Before I could even know
I gotta move on
Now that you’re gone
And I gotta
Hold one to the last hope
Of ever seeing you again
In person
Cause now
I’m daydreaming about you (about you)
It’s not like me to hold
But every where I look
I see your blue eyes
Staring back into mine
And it’s not like I don’t wanna move on
But everything reminds me
How you left me
Without telling me
And I just wanna leave you like you left me
(Like you left me)
Some days it seems like you’re still here
And some days I still look for you
And some days I wish I could break down
in front of you
And some days I wish you would have told me
That you were leaving
Cause then maybe that would have
Spared me
From all the hurt you gave me
But now I’m daydreaming about you
I used to think that songs had to rhyme
But now I understand they make me cry
Cause every song I hear on the radio
Makes me think about those sweet blue eyes
And how they hurt me so
And how I wanna hurt you more
Some days I hope that you show up at my door
Tell me why you left me on the shore
And some days I wish I could just punch you face
For all the hurt caused me
But baby
You got me
Daydreaming about you (about you) -
Do you like it? It’s about one of my best friends whom I had a crush on moving away and me finding out on f***ing Valentine’s Day! It was so fun! So much so I spent my Valentine’s Day crying on my floor on the phone with my friend trying to comfort me!
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are you ok? the songs great, but...
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No I’m not okay
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what happened?
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I’m just sad and confused about everything in my life. And it’s just stressful for me 😔 I can’t focus on anything I’m probably failing math and I just don’t feel great about myself
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just remember everybody sucks at math, and from what i've seen of you, you are an amazing, smart person. life is stressful but we cant do anything about it.
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how are you today?
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Okay, I’ll try to write you a pop song about bi pride. Here’s what I came up with:
Verse 1: I don’t need a label to define who I am I don’t need a box to fit in with your plan I’m just me, and I’m proud of it I love who I love, and I don’t regret it
Chorus: I’m bi and I’m beautiful I’m bi and I’m brave I’m bi and I’m bold I’m bi and I’m here to stay Don’t tell me who to be or who to love 'Cause I’m bi and I’m enough
Verse 2: Some people may judge me or try to bring me down Some people may doubt me or try to turn me around But I don’t care what they say or do 'Cause I know myself and I know the truth
Chorus: I’m bi and I’m beautiful I’m bi and I’m brave I’m bi and I’m bold I’m bi and I’m here to stay Don’t tell me who to be or who to love 'Cause I’m bi and I’m enough
Bridge: I don’t need your approval or your validation I don’t need your permission or your explanation I’m just living my life the way I want to 'Cause I’m bi and I’m happy with you
Chorus: I’m bi and I’m beautiful I’m bi and I’m brave I’m bi and I’m bold I’m bi and I’m here to stay Don’t tell me who to be or who to love 'Cause I’m bi and I’m enough
Outro: I’m bi and I’m beautiful (yeah, yeah) I’m bi and I’m brave (yeah, yeah) I’m bi and I’m bold (yeah, yeah) I’m bi and I’m here to stay (yeah, yeah) Don’t tell me who to be or who to love (no, no) 'Cause I’m bi and I’m enough (yeah, yeah)
Received message. Okay, I'll try to write you a pop song about bi pride. Here's what I came up with: Verse 1: I don't need a label to define who I am I don't need a box to fit in with your plan I'm just me, and I'm proud of it I love who I love, and I don't regret it Chorus: I'm bi and I'm beautiful I'm bi and I'm brave I'm bi and I'm bold I'm bi and I'm here to stay Don't tell me who to be or who to love 'Cause I'm bi and I'm enough Verse 2: Some people may judge me or try to bring me down Some people may doubt me or try to turn me around But I don't care what they say or do 'Cause I know myself and I know the truth Chorus: I'm bi and I'm beautiful I'm bi and I'm brave I'm bi and I'm bold I'm bi and I'm here to stay Don't tell me who to be or who to love 'Cause I'm bi and I'm enough Bridge: I don't need your approval or your validation I don't need your permission or your explanation I'm just living my life the way I want to 'Cause I'm bi and I'm happy with you Chorus: I'm bi and I'm beautiful I'm bi and I'm brave I'm bi and I'm bold I'm bi and I'm here to stay Don't tell me who to be or who to love 'Cause I'm bi and I'm enough Outro: I'm bi and I'm beautiful (yeah, yeah) I'm bi and I'm brave (yeah, yeah) I'm bi and I'm bold (yeah, yeah) I'm bi and I'm here to stay (yeah, yeah) Don't tell me who to be or who to love (no, no) 'Cause I'm bi and I'm enough (yeah, yeah)
My first complete decent song!!! do you like it? -
half of it anyways... the program i did it on added a few things...
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Verse 1: I’m feeling good, I’m feeling great Got a smile on my face, it’s a brand new day I’m on my way, I’m on my path To chase my dreams and never look back
Chorus: Pop music, it’s in my soul It lifts me up and makes me whole Pop music, it’s my escape From the worries of the world, it’s never too late
Verse 2: I’m dancing free, I’m dancing wild With every beat, I feel alive I’m in the moment, I’m in the now With pop music, I’ll never come down
Chorus: Pop music, it’s in my soul It lifts me up and makes me whole Pop music, it’s my escape From the worries of the world, it’s never too late
Bridge: I’ll sing along to every song And let the rhythm carry me along Pop music is my heart and soul And with every note, I’ll never grow old
Chorus: Pop music, it’s in my soul It lifts me up and makes me whole Pop music, it’s my escape From the worries of the world, it’s never too late
Outro: So come on and dance with me tonight We’ll let pop music be our guide Together we’ll chase our dreams And live life to the extreme. -
Verse 1: I’m feeling alive, I’m feeling free With every step, I’m chasing my dreams I’m on a journey, I’m on my way To find my place in the world today
Chorus: Pop music, it’s my guide It lifts me up and takes me high Pop music, it’s my friend Through the ups and downs until the end
Verse 2: I’m singing loud, I’m singing proud With every note, I’ll stand my ground I’m in the spotlight, I’m in the zone With pop music, I’ll never be alone
Chorus: Pop music, it’s my guide It lifts me up and takes me high Pop music, it’s my friend Through the ups and downs until the end
Bridge: I’ll dance to the beat of my own drum And let pop music be my fun It’s in my heart and in my soul And with every song, I’ll never grow old
Chorus: Pop music, it’s my guide It lifts me up and takes me high Pop music, it’s my friend Through the ups and downs until the end
Outro: So come on and sing with me tonight We’ll let pop music be our light Together we’ll chase our dreams And live life to the extreme.
which is better?
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