Summers Moon
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Thread Topic: Summers Moon
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Goldlilly NoviceThis is a book I am writing now it is very good the beginning is boring and a little stupid. The other parts of my book are cool
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Goldlilly NoviceThe last chapter I wrote will be posted later
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Goldlilly NoviceHere is the last chapter : me the wolf. Now for the third time, killing someone. Totally forgetting my human side, Tycan, and my brother. My brother was losing to much blood. He was dying. Because of me.
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Goldlilly NoviceIf you liked it please tell me thank you
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Goldlilly NoviceChapter 1: The house looked old. Old as in torn up clothes that can't fit you anymore. We moved from Arkannsas to Romainia.the reason why is because we were broke.out of money. My grandpa died one year ago, and the money was left for us. We had to go to Romainia to get the money.
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Goldlilly NoviceRead please
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Uh...it could use more description. And try to show, not tell. Mix it up with the sentances, and tell me more. Use more emotion. Also, this was really short. One chapter should be much longer.
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How old are you?
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*Arkansas *Romania
Don't misspell my home state's name. :I -
Sorry, kid. Im gonna have to come out and say it. This story isnt that good...but you CAN get better! Just take peoples advice, and dont complain.
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