I need some help...
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Thread Topic: I need some help...
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I'm writing a part in my story, where a two of the characters escape from a garage from soldiers with pistols. There are three soldiers, one that has beem killed by the main character who also has a pistol.
How do you think I should write it? I'm terrible at action scenes!! x(
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The boy turns his body and shoot and the man, only inches away from him, in what feels like slow motion. The man falls to the ground.
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I just realized I had a spelling mistake in my writing...
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This can be from any POV:
The three soldiers run after us. I take out my pistol, but I didn't see the (object of your choice) in front of me. I tumble over the (oject) and land hard on the floor. I spin to my back. A soldier leaps on me and I pull out my pistol. I cloes my eyes and hope that I shot him. A moment later I looked up. The soldier had fallen. I stumble to my feet and I continue to run.
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Oooh very good!! :) I was only asking for ideas on how to write it, can I use that for my story? :) I'll credit you!
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Sure you can!
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