One Way Out
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Thread Topic: One Way Out
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~Chapter One~ Alexis walked home with her friends. She couldn't stand the heat. The merciless sun was beating its rays on their delicate skin. Leslie, her friend since first grade, looked over at her. "High school was fun, don't you think? And the boys were hot!" Alexis laughed. Leslie was single, so was she. They didn't have trouble finding boys, it's just that they wanted to enjoy being single. She sighed. "Well, I guess" Leslie gasped. "You guess? Did you not see Marco?" she asked, placing a hand over her heart dramatically. Alexis laughed harder. "Well, to be honest, he isn't cute. I'm not into boys with paper white skin and super black hair" This time they both laughed. A half hour later, they reached Alexis house. As she walked towards the door, Leslie called after her. "Bye Alex! See you tomorrow!" Alexis smiled and waved. The second she got into the house, she slammed her books on the table. It was eerily quiet. "I'm home!" she hollered. No response. She looked around the house.
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They must have gone somewhere she thought. The last room was their bedroom. And to her shock, she was greeting with a pool of blood and both of her parents lying dead on the floor. Please review the first chapter! I won't continue if noone likes it.
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AWSOME!
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Wow, that was really good! I liked the blood-curdling ending LoL.
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~Chapter 3~ Alexis stared at the bloody mess of her parents. "Mom! Dad!" she screamed. She ran downstairs and yanked the housephone from the reciever. She dialed 911 frantically and waited desperately for someone to answer. Come on, come on! she screamed in her head. Finally they picked up. "You've just dialed 911, state your emergency and remain calm" ~ About 5 minutes later, the paramedics came, along with the sheriff. They studied the crime scene while Alexis cried wildly. Her mother and father were taken to the hospital while with the evidence the crime scene provided, the cops were able to tell that it was a murder. At least Jackie is safe Alexis thought, looking down at her little sister, who was trembling from fear. Chappy 2 done, thank you ILM and Kitty for the reviews! I hope you all liked this chapter as well.
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(Holy s---, I ran out of characters to put this down as well, Truten gave me the draft for the second chapter, so this is her work. She didn't have time, so she asked me to type it down for 5 bucks xD)
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That was really good :)
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~Chapter Three~ Jackie looked at Alexis. "Mom and Dad...." she started, but was cut off by a young boy walking up to them, actually, he wasn't so young. About Alexis' age, maybe older. He had paper white skin, icy blue eyes, and dirty blonde hair. "Hullo miss" he said, extending his arm out for Jackie to shake his hand, then Alexis. Jackie shook his hand without a second thought, but Alexis hesitated before she actually shook his hand. Who is he, coming up to us when our parents just died and saying hi? Alexis wondered. "Very nice to meet you. My name is Kosh" he said. "And what may your names be, little ladies?" he asked in a warm, happy voice. Jackie replied with ease. "I'm Jackie" she stated. Alexis, on the other hand, was having trouble in trusting this guy. "I'm um, Alexis" she said. Kosh smiled. "Ah, what beautiful names, no?" His smiled turned into a frown. "I have heard that your parents have died, and I'm willing to make an offer for you two"
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One way out, and three ways in. lol, jk. Koolz.
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What can this boy possibly offer the two orphans? Find out in chapter three! And... thank you Vege for typing chapter two down for five bucks xD and thank you xXvampiregirlXx for the review!
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Again I say, AWSOME!
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Wow, that's great! Keep it up. =)
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(This is Vege signing in as Trunks xD) ~Chapter Four~ Alexis placed her hands on her hips. "What?" she asked. Kosh kept frowning. "Your parents died, and now you're orphans. Yo can live with me" Jessie smiled and nodded, but Alexis was confused. What? We barely met this guy and he wants us to move in with him? she thought. Kosh waited patiently for their decision. There's something eerie about him... Alexis sighed. "Sure" she said. Kosh smiled. "Great! Pack your things and go to the black house at the end of the street" he then disappeared. What the hell?! Chappy four done! Thank you ILM, Kitty, and Hikky! And thank you Trunks for the five bucks xD
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~Chapter Eleven~ "Wow! Did you see that Alex?" Jessie asked excitedly. Alexis nodded. Impossible! There is no such thing as people who can teleport! she thought. But for her sister's sake, she nodded. She walked Jessie back to the house somberly and they began to pack up, putting clothes, pictures, etc. in a box. "Don't take too much, Jessie. Kosh may not have enough so much space," Alexis told Jessie. The little girl nodded. After a few minutes more, they were done packing. Alexis and Jessis headed out for Kosh's house. He isn't normal. We can't live with him. We just can't. But Jessie cannot live without the protection of a male. Alexis thought. They reached the black house at the end of the street. Well, as you know, I'm still doing this for Trunks when she cannot, and she said sorry for taking a long time for updating. Ya know, college takes alot of your free time... and then she's pregos... Well, tank you for reading!
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Duuuuudddeee... LOL
I just realized I typed in chapter eleven LMFAO
Trunks hasn't worked on it much -.-
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