I tried to make a murder story :\

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Thread Topic: I tried to make a murder story :\

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  tomboykaitie Novice

  14 years ago
  I on the countertop, the one in my kitchen, fiddling with my fingers in anticipation. The anxiety. I was almost shaking, as if I were hyper, but no, it was not from being hyper. Just anxious. It was around the time of 2:38 AM, as it read on the clock. Late, but why. James Anderson and Nix Paulson were usually reliable, on-time, very professional-like with their… “work”. Maybe they have encountered a problem, I began to realize. Witnesses were probably the only trouble they could come across, and if witnesses were the issue, most witnesses are easy to… rid of. I clinched my fists, the anxiety almost hurting. I realize now how impatient I can be, how anxious I get. This was overwhelming me, they should have been here earlier like planned. Just as I began to walk back and forth across the kitchen, upset, a knock at the door. I was practically sprinting to the door, to let them inside, first Nix Paulson who was looking a bit mad and then James Anderson, who also shared the same frustrated expression on his face. I invited them to sit on the couch so we could discuss matters.
  James Anderson was the first who spoke, “You lied to us.”
  Nix Paulson spoke next. “Andrew Mark was the guy.”
  I smiled, and responded, “I know. But he’s gone, am I right?”
  James Anderson and Nix Paulson exchanged looks… angrily. Nix Paulson sat there and James Anderson slumped in the couch frustrated, like a small child would when they do not get what they want. I almost wanted to laugh and explain to James Anderson how he reminded me a little boy getting frustrated, but I held my tongue.
  Nix Paulson spoke out again, “We made a mistake though.”
  I closed my eyes and rubbed the back of my neck then looked up again at both the men. “Excuse me? What mistake?” and I sat there with my heart trying to jump out of my chest. This made me nervous. With such an important deed, mistakes are not allowed to be made. Or else I could get caught. Or else we could get caught. There was no answer, so I said again only louder, and more frustration to my tone, “What Mistake?”
  James Anderson cleared his throat, looked down at the ground, and said without even looking me in the eye, “We killed the wrong guy.”
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  tomboykaitie Novice

  14 years ago
  BTW, It's fake!!!!
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  Hatshepsut237 Newbie

  14 years ago
  Wow, cool
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  xVaMpIrEx Novice

  14 years ago
  its kool.
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  tomboykaitie Novice

  14 years ago
  Really? I thought it sucked.
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  Hatshepsut237 Newbie

  14 years ago
  It's awsome!
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  xXvampiregirlXx Newbie

  14 years ago
  That really good kaitie.
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  I like music Novice

  14 years ago
  It's great! I really liked it. =)
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  AngelofDeath Newbie

  14 years ago
  That was awesome,Kaitie!
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  emowolf13 Novice

  14 years ago
  Nice job Katie!
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  gaby400 Newbie

  14 years ago
  awesome

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