I wrote something for my class...
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Thread Topic: I wrote something for my class...
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I used characters from Sonic...but still...I want to know what you guys think! :)
Espio the Chameleon was floating. He wasn't doing it. No strings were attached. No one was helping him. He was just, floating. The teen scanned his surroundings. It was just black. Pitch black all around him. Espio was confused. 'How am I floating? Where am I? Where is everybody else...?' His thoughts echoed the silent room. Suddenly he heard a blood curdling scream. Quickly but with almost know effort, he turned to the horror filled sound. He only saw darkness. Then he heard it again. Except it said his name. "ESPIO! HELP!" He turned to the sound. He put his vibrating hand on his wrist to find a knife. But to his surprise, he wasn't armed with anything. Another scream filled the silence, and again he turned to the sound. The same result. More screams began to echo in the pitch black room. A six year old's. A teenage girl's. A man's.
Espio recognized the voices, he just couldn't figure out who they belonged to. He wanted to just get away. Run. But his floating stage wouldn't let him move. "Stop..." Espio whispered. The screams just got louder and louder, as if they were surrounding him. The shaking teen put his hands to his ears. "P-please...stop.." He said louder. But still, the screams got closer and closer. "STOP!" He yelled. For the first time in his life, Espio actually felt scared. Then he opened his golden eyes. -
LetsParty NewbieCool! I did spot a spelling error though.
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Where? I'll fix it! :)
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LetsParty NewbieYou put 'know' instead of 'no' in the sentence:
Quickly but with almost KNOW effort . . . -
Wow. I'm such a moron sometimes.
HOW COULD I HAVE MISSED THAT?! LOL! -
LetsParty Newbielol i acctualy see that one lots of times :)
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