Lion King (my version)
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Thread Topic: Lion King (my version)
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im not finished or anything but i wanted you guys to see
"Simba?!" says a voice. "Dad?!" says small little Simba lost in the dark wilderness. "Simba! Can you hear me?!" says the voice of a worried father."Dad!" Simba immediately follows the voice. "Simba!", "DAD!!" as he searches for his father he sees a shadow in the distance, oh how happy he must have felt "Dad! I thought I would never see you again!" he says but just as the little cubs happiness came...it left being replaced by fear and sorrow seeing not his father, but his evil Uncle Scar... "Hes not alive, little nephew.". Not knowing what to do, Simba calls for his father...the voice of the mighty leader was not heard. He calls for him again, still no answer. Scar stepped aside, revealing the red-manned lion behind him...dead. "NOOOOOOO!" shouts Simba with tears streaming down his face. "Look at what you have done!" says Scar. He gets closer and closer to Simba making him back away, "You killed you own Father!" he shouts "NO! I didnt mean to!!", he walks back so much that he slips, but catches himself, by which he is now hanging from a cliff. He looks up helplessly at his Uncle. "Uncle Scar! Help me!!" instead of a rescue, Scar looks at him straight in the eyes and says "Long live the Prince..." and with that, Simba loses his grip and falls into the dark abyss hearing nothing but the evil laugh of his uncle.
"AAAAAHHH!!!!" he screams. He looks around...a dream...it was only a dream! "Simba, are you alright?" says the voice of his mother Sarabi. "I-Im fine...just another dream..." Kovina, Simbas little sister, woke up "Mother? Why is Simba screaming again?" she asks "Your brother just had another bad dream." She walks over next to him. "Oh...what was it about?" she asks her brother. "D-Dad..." says the young cub. Kovina was born after the death of Mufasa; shes never met her own father, but she has been told many wonderful stories about him. She slowly walked over to her brother and nudged him. "Simba, I know its hard to stop thinking about someone that isnt there anymore. I cannot stop thinking what daddy was like." "Its not the same Kovina..." he says "Dad was more than just a leader; he was more than just a father, he was my friend. And now hes gone...I wish you had a chance to meet him..." "Actually I have!" "What?! No you havent, you were born after his death, not before it!" says Simba, surprised. Kovina laughed and said "No not like I have seen him like I do you. But I see Dad in you..." Simba looks over the horizon "Everyone says that." "Well it is true...you are really brave just like him!" "Yes but, Kovina...Dad was brave when he had to be..." "What?" says Kovina "But he wasnt afraid of anything!" "He was once..." says Simba "Really?" "Yes...Nala and I went exploring one day at an elephant graveyard...hyenas came and tried to make a meal out of us. Dad came and rescued us...Ill never forget what he told me that night." "What did he say?" "He said being brave, doesnt mean you go looking for trouble. And that the great kings of the past look down on us from the stars...guiding us, including him." Kovina looks up and around "I dont see any stars...or kings." She says. Simba rolls his eyes, "Thats because its morning? You wont be able to see stars." "I knew that..." Simba sighs. "Mom, can Kovina and I go play?" "Of course Simba, make sure you stay close to your sister." "I will!" the two cubs then went off to find their friends. They make their way to the waterhole; "Do you see Layla anywhere?" asks Kovina "No..." the two cubs continue to search until... "Kovina! Simba!" says a small voice. They turn around seeing their elephant friend. "Hey Layla!" says Simba, "Whats up you two?" "We were wondering if youd like to play with us." Says Kovina. "Sure Id love to! Just give me a minute or two!" the little elephant turned and walked off, a few minutes later she came back. "Ok Im ready to go, just had to get permission." The three companions went and looked around the meadows to find their other friends. "Tempest, Venti? Are you guys here?" says Kovina. The three hear nothing but silence "Hello??" just then two cheetah cubs jump from hiding in the grass scaring the two cubs and elephant. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!" they scream, the two cheetah cubs begin to laugh. "That was awesome Venti!" says one cub "I know! You should have seen the looks on your faces!" laughs another. "Ok guys that wasnt funny" says Layla. The two slowly stops laughing "Sorry..." "Ok...so which is which?" asks Simba to the cheetahs "I know you are twins." "Im Venti" says the golden furred, amber eyed one. "Im Tempest" says the darker furred, blue eyed one. "Ok...cmon lets go get the others!" says Kovina. The five went out to find their other amigos. "Hey! Simba! Wait up!" says a voice from a distance. He turns around only to see his best friend Nala along with her friend Taya. "Oh hey Nala, Taya! We were actually looking for you." "Alright! Cmon lets play!" "We cant now we have to find the others." "Oh yeah" says Taya. "Cmon lets go back to Pride Rock maybe we can find Ziwa and Kivuli." Says Simba running back, with his friends and sister running along. They reach Pride Rock and looks around... They finally find the two underneath a tree sleeping. Venti pokes Kivuli, making his ear twitch. "Can someone wake them up please?" asks Nala. "Sure thing, watch this." The young elephant stretches her trunk by the two sleeping lion cubs ear and blasts the loud noise waking the two up. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" screams Ziwa jumping on Kivuli "Uhhh...Ziwa? atract the claws please" says Kivuli. -
Nice!
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thanks :D
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I like it XD
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Thanks LOL
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gee i might wanna work on it abit more
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ICE AGE QUOTE IN THERE!
EPIC!
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