My hiakus
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Thread Topic: My hiakus
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eilloh NewbieBright with shining eyes,
Huntress of the starry night,
O queen of midnight
Rippling water,
Falling in the icy mist,
Neath the frozen ice
Emotionless time, O how it runs with swift pace,
Waiting for nothing
Falling,perishing,
I'm holding on to nothing,
Can't even cry out
I see a spider,
Do not kill that spider,
I'll take him outside. -
Those are all really good. =) I can't write many haikus but I occasionally try.
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I love haikus, and those were really good :)
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eilloh NewbieThis isn't a haiku,but i'll post it anyways.
Frozen
Your heart is a prison,
Which binds me tighter than chains,
Your words are piercing daggers,
Which numbs my mind like ice
You speak with honeyed lips,
Which hides the poison underneath.
You left me in a trance,
Of which I couldn't escape.
Love is truly a trap,
From where your cold like ice,
Unable to go back to life,
But never to move on.
It's as if time stops,
Life still exists,
But you don't,
Your stuck between life,and death.
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Wow, that was amazing! You poetry has lots of depth and meaning. =)
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eilloh NewbieHere is another.
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