MY FIRST PAGE OF MY BOOK!
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Chapter One: Meet Carmen
For many years, I have done my best to save the world on behave of my Father, Miguel Cortez, and of my Mother, Alexandria Cortez. Never have I, nor will I forget the last words of my father; Son, no matter how big a problem may be, you can still overcome it if you so choose to. But, if you run from it, the problem will overcome you. I took his words to heart and never have I lost a battle. I am Carmen Cortez...Secret Agent. My father and mother were Spanish spies themselves, and as their son. It is up to me to follow in their footsteps, and become legend. And I will get that chance, on this silent, dark, yet faithful night...sailing throughout the foggy night, nothing to be seen but the light showing from the small sailboat, I was on deck looking out to see if I could find anything unusual. No luck. The sailors on that boat knew about me...of course I have tried my best to keep a low profile, although...I was sure to trust them since they are workers of a good friend of mine. But even so, you can never put your trust in anyone...especially if you are a spy. There was an old man on that boat...never knew him, nor heard of him...but he knew a lot about legends. Every night he would tell a story...but little did everyone know that I myself was looking for a legendary gem, the Red Ruby. As I was taking a look around, that old timer began to tell another legend...and coincidentally, he spoke of the Red Ruby. The soul of the Red Ruby is very delicate...it is said that this gem can change the life of a man. Whether it is good or evil. He said. The rubys power is like none other. It is said that it gives supernatural powers...if anyone was to reach this gem, he would instantly be as powerful as the ruby. But no one has ever found it, yet legend says that it is hidden in an ancient Indian temple...of course no one has found that either. But there is a man out there seeking for it...and he wont rest until he finds it. He stopped and glared at me...which gave me goose bumps, which is unusual for an Agent like me. But we all get nervous at times right? Even though I was supposed to be seen and not heard, I actually took the guts to speak up. Tell me of this young man. I say with my back turned. Young man? he asks As I recall correctly, this man is about 45 years old. 45?! I ask myself That preposterous! Im 28! Oh uh...please excuse me then sir...tell me of this old man I say getting back to reality. This man has been looking for the Ruby for decades...he killed one of the best spies in the whole wide world...now what was that fellows name...some Spanish name...Michael? No...Malcolm? Nothats not even a Spanish name. says the man Spanish? I think to myself Oh thats what his name was...Miguel Cortez! May he rest in peace... says the man. Father... I think to myself again...Do you have any idea who the man, who killed this spy, is? I ask turning to face him. I believe his name is...Jackson...Liam Jackson...why? asks the man. No reason... I say quickly then headed below deck. I sat on my bunk...That was close...he could have noticed who I was...I need to be more careful...of course I havent been myself ever since Fathers death...and mothers death just made things worse for my life...of course that is no excuse. I just wish they were still here, alive. I might as well get some sleep...I am suppose to be meeting with my friend tomorrow. Maybe he might have something for me while Im there. I laid in bed and fell asleep. The next day, it was noisier than ever! I woke up at the sound of music. I walked up on deck to see what the commotion was all about. Turns out that the people on the island that I was sailing to were celebrating about something...why? I will never know. Anyways I saw a man in a distance. Ramundo! I say greeting my friend. Carmen! Its good to see you again! How are you? he asks I doing well thank you, how are you? I ask I am fine as well. Come, we will get you settled in. says Ramundo leading me to his house. You know Carmen; I know that you are in search of the Red Ruby, and so is someone else Liam Jackson, I know I say Uhno. I mean, yes, he too is after the gem but there is another spy, Agent James, hes on our side...but there is very little about him says Ramundo. Huh...where can I meet him? I ask Soon Carmen, soon he says -
EPIC!
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thisismyquiz JuniorCool story!
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chillz jessi! lol
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