help needed.........my novel "Spying or Loving"
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Thread Topic: help needed.........my novel "Spying or Loving"
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i need help.....what must i write after this?
Chap. 1 Meet Carmen
Meet Carmen Cortez, Spanish Intellegence, 28 years of age, 11 years of experience, and son of the late Miguel Julius Cortez, and Alexandria Elizabeth Cortez. As his son, Carmen must take over his father's unfinished mission and find the Red Ruby. The Red Ruby is not just any gem....but a gem that can change history! Now you may be thinking "How can one simple jewel be so important?" well if you'd like I'll tell you the story. It all started a very long time ago...months after Miguel Cortez's tragic death. When the days were bright yet very dark and gloomey.... -
Cool chapter.
You could write about the day when Miguel died and how the Rudy went missing for something... I hope that makes sence. -
hmmm......i could.....but...heres the thing...the red ruby...its in India...in a forest...in an ancient Indian temple...
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Ok.....uuummmmmm
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i'm here (brain storming) *thinking* got it, (did u say months after the dad died?) ok i was thinking if thhe dad didn't die, he was on his anniversary and they went to India there they got their new mission.
Then if its after his dad and mom died, Carmen's given to his godfather who happens to be a cllose family friend and lives in New Dehli, he goes there and the village he stays in, people talk about so may legends, but one person caught his attention a person who knew his father and what he was searching for -
@mitchy.........wow.....thats pretty good...and yes his parents died
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okay :)
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