What do you guys think of this?

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Thread Topic: What do you guys think of this?

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  zeronightshade Novice

  12 years ago
  L never had an equal until the Kira case. L never had such a tough adversary before the Kira case. L never had such a challenge before the Kira case.
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  CodySimpsonLuv Junior

  12 years ago
  Thats great, this could be an interesting story!
• L Lawliet Newbie

  12 years ago
  Woah fanfics.
• IamLelouch Newbie

  12 years ago
  It sucks.
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  The Coldest Sun Junior

  12 years ago
  It's definitely a good start. But I think prologues are meant to be longer. Will you extend on it? :3
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  AudreeForever Novice

  12 years ago
  If you said something about the story, Like what it's about, exactly, I think I could help.
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  Moyashi Advanced

  12 years ago
  Needs to be longer.
  Don't have to repeat everything.
  Show more on how it's related to the story.

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