All types of poems (:
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Thread Topic: All types of poems (:
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No, Not mine. I'm horrible at rhyming
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Lelouch: your poem was really good ! and a poem doesnt have to rhyme for it to sound good! so dont say ur not good at it cause i really liked your poem
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Noooo! I just came up with this really good poem then my connection went out and I lost it. *cries*
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aww super sad faces! im sorry do u remember at least some of it?
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Yay!! I got it back somehow! Here it is:
You were suppose to catch me when I fall
but honestly I don't think you care at all
bringing me down further
wanting me to call
but never answering
so I will fall.
I wait at my window
watching for you to come
but then I remember that you always run
you ran from your problems
you ran from your life
you ran from your troubles
and left me like a kite.
In the wind
I feel I could fly away
waiting for you to come today
but then I see the knife
that ended your life
and wonder if I should do the same.
Then I hear voices
calling out,"Who are you to blame?"
and I think to myself
of the days that I did
I followed you down
to the ground
and we fell
down a well
and I heard the bell
and you thought "Oh, well."
and dragged me down further.
Well it's not this time.
I have the dime
and if it lands on heads
yours will be mine.
I'm tired of this game
the one that made you insane
the one that took your life
the one that gave you that knife
and made you to blame. -
damn i truly LOVE it it got me thinking and it kinda brought me tears to my eyes !
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Thx! I'm happy I got it back lol
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i am to! that way now people will be able to see how talented u are :D
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Thanks so much!
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Alyk:Thanks for the comment. Your poem is really good too.
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Thanks :)
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As I sit here,
I daydream away.
Wishing that I
could meet you one day.
I sigh and wait,
and lay on my bed.
The truth is,
I can't get you out of my head.
Days pass by,
still thinking of you.
Hopefully,
one day,
I'll be able to see you. -
Mah suckish poem. xP Not my best, but the only one I can find on here.
Broken
If a friend would change your life,
Would an enemy be considered a friend?
If a friend always includes,
Why am I always left alone?
You said, "I'll always be there for you"
So now I ask,
Where were you "friend"?
When I cried,
When or when I died?
You never cared,
So why did I consider you,
A friend? -
IFMN: great job i really like your poem !
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Thanks (:
Teresa: :o my mind is blown.
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