tell me what u think
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Thread Topic: tell me what u think
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Its the end of a book i wrote but never gave a title or edited. This is the last few sentences
...but theres this one moment were not dead... but your not living.
As i walked into that room and went up to Jason my gun ready to fire. I aimed and i heard a gunshot. Was it mine? At that time my world went dark and I knew at this time at this moment that i didnt die but at the same time...i wasnt living. -
Its sounds good to me.
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Cools
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Thanks you 2 ^_^
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Only 2 people care? I like feedback if u dont like it what tell me wat to change
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well i kinda got it..
but im not really a deep person to really understand that.. but by what i got it sounds really cool -
Hmmm :I To be completely honest, it seems a lot like Harry Potter 7 (if you've read the books) But other than that good. Maybe I just find it similar because both follow the quest architype.
If you haven't read Harry Potter, what happens is: In the final battle between Harry and Voldemort, Harry knows he has a horcrux in him so he has to die, but Voldemort needs to do it. So Harry 'dies' and goes into this magic world with ghosts of his past, blah blah blah. Then Dumbleodre tells him he's not dead, but the horcrux inside him is gone and Harry lives to fight Voldemort. ._. Sorry, but I suck at summaries. -
@teresa this came out from a idea not harry poter.dont like those books
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@andrew Whether you like the books or not, the ideas still are very similar. You asked for an opinion and she provided one.
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Wharlts wrong if i say i dont like those books? Im just saying i dont like it i wasnt saying it didnt sound similar
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Ehhhhh! Don't start arguing you two. -.-
@andrew What Swifty said is right, whether you like Harry Potter or not, I think the ideas are similar. The fact that you don't like them doesn't matter.
Also, I said "it might just be because you're both following the quest architype" So read the full thing next time :P -
Horseluver JuniorWay to go Teresa! People get into a LOT of arguments on these forums, thanks for preventing one.
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I'd have to read more of it before telling you if I liked iit or not.
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