i was given permission
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Thread Topic: i was given permission
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the_monster NewbieOk its un-edited just so you know.it was made in like 2-3 minutes so dont judge.its a 2:57 second long song
(Music plays)
so walked up to you like a true player. Ive never felt love till I meet you.
You see babe girl your so beautiful I never thougth you looked e-emo
Lets go and party to the stars because your a beautiful shooting star
I want to spend my life forever with you...because girl I love you!
(Music Plays 35 seconds stops and just claps play next)
You see babe girl I love you let me spend my life with you
Just give me a chance to prove to you(claps stop) that girl I love you(music starts)
You see girl your so beautiful i never thought you looked e-emo
(Music plays) look in the mirror your so beautiful
If it had audio it would be better
So what do we change??? It will really help -
ruby62 Newbiekool
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I could totally see this on the charts, sounds pretty good. I edited a little bit, but I could probably do alot better if I heard the audio(if any exists now).
So walked up to you like a true player.
Ive never felt love till I met you.
You see baby girl your so beautiful, I never thought you looked e-emo.
All others don't compa-are to you.
Lets go party to the stars because your a beautiful shooting star
I want to spend my life forever with you...because girl I love you!
(Music Plays 35 seconds stops and just claps play next)
Baby girl I love you.(short pause) Let me spend my life with you.(hold out the you for at least 5-6 seconds)
Just give me a chance to prove to you(claps stop) that girl I love you(music starts)
You see girl your so beautiful.
(Music plays) Look in the mirror your so beautiful -
It seems kinda repetative :I No offence
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@phoenix i edited it and its looks so close to u yours
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