My Poems.
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Thread Topic: My Poems.
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wow,thats messed up,try and like show your teaches,cuz they know a lot of people.
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Followed (2010/7/26)
She went in to the forest,
With only moonlight to guide her way,
Her parents would protest,
That she go out in the day,
The wind swept by her knees,
And clouds filled the sky,
Something she couldn't see,
Was watching her all the time,
As she progressed on,
Trying to find her lost gift,
She then came upon,
A leaf that happened to drift,
Bright green it glowed,
Even in the darkness,
Were nothing showed,
It was like happiness,
But that gave her away,
Now she was exposed,
If she'd only gone in the day,
But this was what she chose,
Suddenly, a wolf pounced.
Scared her to death,
Attacked her with sharp teeth,
Before she could draw another breath,
Her remains were on the floor,
Her blood lying in a huddle,
The wolf was hungry for more,
And her bones lay cracked in a huddle, -
I'm too embarrassed to show my teachers, but maybe my friends cause they love literature and always borrow books from me, so maybe they'd read my poetry. =)
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trust me,people would go crazy for these poems.
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You think so? Maybe I should show people more often.
My mum says I sit in my room all day, maybe I could show her but... I dunno how, I can't just walk up to her and show it to her.
Besides, throughout her reading of my books, she comments negativley through it but says it's great in the end. :\ -
I got to go, bye.
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well actually thats probably the best way to show her.
And if she doesn't like your books,then try to take notes on what she likes in a book if you want her to be happy with the book. But for other people to like the book,you are just gonna have to try to go over the top with it. -
see ya
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Yah, I guess I have to work harder.
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Nice poems.. they fit my mood
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Thank you Kirsteen. =)
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Cloudy Days (2010/8/8)
The world was cloudy and grey,
Such an aweful day,
The rain dripped on our heads,
And trickled from the roofs on our beds,
Sadness looming all around,
Nobody sleeping safe and sound,
Fear and misery in the hearts,
Trying to look up at the stars,
Sunlight cannot be seen,
Like the clouds are so mean,
No rays of light shining through,
Nothing anyone could ever do,
Sit by the window, and feel the cold,
Not sure how long my body will hold,
Tears trickle down the cheek,
This will last long, maybe weeks. -
Lonely
I'm so lonely,
Inside and outside,
Withought you,
I don't know what to do,
I don't know what to say,
It's so boring today,
I feel empty,
Crumbling up inside,
I don't know what to believe,
Unsure of what to retrieve,
I'm so lonely, I need a hug,
This desease is one tough bug,
And I walk down the street,
On a cloudy day,
Surrounded by so many people,
I don't know what to say,
I'm so lonely,
Locked up in my own world,
I don't even know me,
I'm just a lonely girl. -
Give it to me darling!
Sick of hidin' in here,
Tired of living in fear,
Want to break free...!
And let the world see,
Cause I don't care anymore,
We gotta settle this score,
So we can live in sanctuary,
And you can love me,
I say give it to me darlin'!
Don't be shy to show me how you are,
I say give it to me darlin'!
With this we could go far,
Tell me what you want,
And I'll give you,
You can go and flaunt,
Everything you like is true,
So show me your love, baby,
Tell me what you'd like from me,
I wanna know what you feel,
If you find this all real. -
I have some new ones, Imma get the notebook.
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