Black rose
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Thread Topic: Black rose
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It was a snowy December, snow circling like phantoms roaming the streets. I rushed home, flushed with excitement to see the happy smiles and warm glow of the star on top of the Christmas tree. The orphanage is very friendly, and you always get a gift on Christmas.
I was so happy for some reason, and i looked up at the stars. They were all bright and visible tonight, something i don't see usually.
I then noticed a man. He was on the big tower clock we had. The clock was bright yellow and was in numeral numbers, and was an old clock. I saw the man on one of its arrows. It was impossible, it was so high up, he could've falled and died. I stared in awe, when he looked at me.
He then did something i never expected. He jumped down from the tower clock! It was unreal, impossible. He landed lightly like a cat, and stared at me with hungry eyes. He had ivory skin and black hair, and was in a large black coat with a dark purple scarf draped over his shoulders. I was loss for words as he strolled over me, and i was shaking! He scared me for some reasons, and i took a few steps backwards, my mouth still open slightly.
"Young lady," he said.
"Um...uh...y-yes?" i stammered.
"What are you doing here in the middle of the night?" he asked, and suddenly blood dripped out of his mouth! "Little girls are not suppose to be alone at this time."
I screamed, and ran back, he cackled and followed me. I sprinted with fear, just screaming and howling. He chased me down an alley, when i ran into a wall. He cornered me, i was trapped!
I turned around to see him, he was crazily giggling and his eyes were red. "For Christmas dinner i feast on a thin girl?" he happily screamed. "How funny will it be when the others hear this!"
I screamed and clawed at the wall, hoping for an escape, something! I huddled in a corner and my screams lowered to soft whimpers. The man came closer and touched my deathly pale cheek, and licked it!! I began hyperventilating, and he licked my other cheek as well.
The he jumped back, and lunged at me with a sound like a scream and growl. he was faster than any leapord and swifter than any gazelle. He suddenly held me and bit my neck. I screamed in pain, but he put his cold hand on my mouth. I didn't feel much after that, only something dripping on my neck. Then the tower clock where i found the man struck 12. It's ringing sound echoed in my head and ringed in my ears. I was shaking, but the man's grip was firm. Then i felt tired, weak, and became limp in the man's grasp as he turned me into a monster.
I regret this. -
that was awesome Scar ^^
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Chapter one: The Change
I hated this man. He turned me into a monster, something i didn't want to be. When i woke up, i felt different. I felt cold and light. I felt numb, and i couldn't move. I started feeling the life coming back to me and stretched. I got up, to see a million rays of stars splashing across the sky. I looked around, and noticed in horror i was on top of the clock! I was on top of the tower, and i blinked and rubbed my eyes, as if this was some sort of illusion. But it was real. I found the man in front of me, gazing at the night sky. At first i was content with the silence, then rage came over me and i ran at him beating my fists at his chest. he chuckled and grabbed my wrists.
"You!" I cried. "You monster!"
"I saved your life," he said calmly.
"Saved my life?," I shrieked.
I didn't know why i was mad at him, but he bit my neck and stalked me. And i didn't know him, but there was a right to be mad.
"Get me down!" I screamed. "Leave me alone, i have to get back to the orphanage!"
"You can't," he mused. "You know i bit you, i'm a vampire. I have turned you into what i am."
I stared at him, and my rage increased.
"You what??" I shouted. "You! You monster! What have you done??
"I had to!" he yelled. "They were after you! They would've turned you into one themselves and took you away!"
I stopped ranting. "Who?" I said in a small voice.
"Not now," he said. He grabbed my hand, and picked me up. I wrapped my arms around his neck and my legs around his waist. "I have to take you somewhere safe," he said and jumped from the tower clock.
He started to run at high speed and all i could do was cling for dear life, praying not to fall. I did not know this man, or why he was helping me.
He stopped in the front of the orphanage. It was quiet, meaning everyone was sleeping. He went to the side of the building and climbed up a drain pipe. From there he climbed the wall with his hands and feet at high speed. In moments we were at a window which i reconigzed the level where my room was at.
"Get your stuff, pack up," he ordered.
"Why?" I said.
"I have to take you away," he whispered. "Someone is looking for you, and i'm saving you."
"I have to take you far away," he continued. "If you stay, you'll be hunted."
"What?" I cried. "Why?"
"There's no time to talk," he hissed. "But i'll say this, it has to do with your mother and father," and with that he opened the window and shoved me through.
I didn't know why, but i obeyed him, getting a duffel bag and packing my clothes hastily and some possesions, such as a teddy bear i had at birth. Once i finished, i looked at my roomate, Nina Mayher. She was my best friend since we shared rooms, and i felt guilty about leaving her.
But this man, whoever he was, had some sort of connection with my parents, i barely knew them. I was found at the step of the orphanage as a baby, with a teddy bear at my side. After a few years in the orphanage, i got sent to another. Then another, where i met Nina. We were insperable, best friends for life. But now i was leaving.
I gave a silent farewell, climbed out the window, with the man who would change my life forever. -
He sprinted across the street, and the orphange building got smaller and smaller. He jsut kept running, and tears slipped down my cheeks. I was leaving my whole life behind. I remember my school friends; Charlotte Vete, Nuva Syler, and of course, Nina Mayher.
Charlotte had blonde hair with black streaks in them and green eyes, and was a troublemaker. We became friends when we scribbled on walls, drawing pictures and both getting in trouble. She was a tomboy, and preferred to be called Charlie.
Nuva Syler is a sweet girl that was a transfer student. That's how we met her She has long black hair and blue eyes. She's very polite, and a good reader too.
Nina was my best friend, with short curly black hair and gleaming brown eyes. She was always by my side, and once stood by me when a bully was harassing me. We were friends since we found out we were roomates, and were insperable.
I cried softly as i held on to the man. -
Thanks Kit ^^
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Your really good scar, i love the story
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That was really good,Scar.
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Wow, that was beautiful, Scar. =) You're really good.
I'm still wondering why everyone thinks I'm the best at writing, I'm not being humble, just, I dunno, I find people better. -
i think you're the Roady
thanks guys i got more
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Cool.
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his blood and kill him. I then wondered why the woman bit him and didn't turn him into a vampire when the other vampire that saved Mr. Spencer did. I asked him that.
"You see," he said. "There are many vampires, like normal vampires that drink blood and also have a special inhuman power, but there are others that can turn a human into a vampire by simply biting them. It's because they have venom in them that can turn us into a vampire. they are special venom vampires, and the Soula Demona has many of them. They are worshipped and feared because they are so rare and special and powerful."
"Wow," I whispered, and he nodded.
"Now let us get some rest," he said. We were in an abandoned building, and Mr. Spencer gave me a red blanket, but none for himself.
"Don't you get cold?" I asked him, and he shook his head.
He suddenly wrapped his hands on my left arm. It was freezing ice cold and chilled me to the bone. "No," he simply said.
"Oh," i breathed, then laid down.
I pulled the scarlet blanket over me, and closed my eyes. I fell asleep in a few minutes, dreaming about my past life and friends. I also dreamed about vampires and venom vampires and mostly-if anyone asked about my dreams- about the mysterious and frightning Mr. Spencer.
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I'll make Chapter 2 soon
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Make...it...NOW!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs around having a tantrem * NOW! NOW! NOW!
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oh..lol i forgot about this sorry *hugs* calm down calm down i'll make it lol ^^
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*waiting patiently*
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