Unfinished Business
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Thread Topic: Unfinished Business
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Trinity was panicking,now. What could make Dakota act like this? Kristen rushed to the agonized teenager's side. 'Did you eat or drink anything?' she asked, Dakota nodded.Kristen asked what she had eaten or drank, the agonized mental patient pointed to a bottle of medicine.
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lol, this is gonna be epic.
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Thanks.
Trinity grabbed the bottle,and noticed that the contents weren't Dakota's painkiller medicine,but gasoline! She rushed over and warned Kristen. 'Wait, the side-affects of drinking gasoline are burning,vomiting,drowsiness and...death!' The redhead psychiatrist declared in an extremely worried tone.
Dakota started to get double-vision, the excruciating burning sensation grew more intense, her throat clotted up with vomit and she began to choke. With one final breath,Dakota collapsed. -
A stab of regret hit Kristen.The redheaded psychiatrist wished she could've saved Dakota before she bit the dust,but it was much too late. Trinity felt fear punch her in the stomach. 'Lets keep moving.' she frowned.
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A former arsonist slept silently in his cell,with a box of matches in his hands. Big mistake. He was unaware that the mysterious masked woman was present. She took one of the matches,lit it, and violently threw it on him,setting his clothes ablaze.
The former arsonist sprinted to the nearest bathroom,ran the water in the sink and stuck his head under the water. To his relief,the flames had been put out. As he tried to lift his head out of the sink, he was met by a horrifing surprise:someone was holding him down! The unknown person kept their extremely tight grip on his head and pushed him down deeper...deeper...deeper. The arsonist could no longer breath and all he could see was the bubbles rising, and then...nothing. -
that was great Angel!
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Thanks,Scar. It really was a twist,huh?
Trinity and Kristen rushed down the pure white hallways. Trinity was determind to get out of this madhouse,before she and Kristen were brutally murdered. 'Look!' the redheaded psychiatrist declared,pointing to a fire exit. Finally, a way out! Trinity thought. Before she could run to the door,the woman with a black bag over her head stopped the girls in their tracks. 'You have no idea how many innocent people I had to go through to get to you,Trinity...' the woman growled as she ripped the bag off and revealed her true self.
She had long brown hair tied in a ponytail,much like Trinity's had once been. The woman's rosy cheeks stuck out like sore thumbs. Trinity already knew she was Linnea Samuels. -
Linnea withdrew an object from her coatpocket. It was a bloodstained needle. 'Now,I can finally obtain my revenge.' the brunette maniac smiled as she lifted her weapon. Kristen blocked Linnea's way to Trinity. 'What the hell did Trin ever do to you,b----?!'the redhead screamed at her,defending her patient/friend. 'Oh,Kristen. Isn't it obvious? She killed my sister, the only one who understood me.' the psychopath explained
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Pedo Bear NewbieOh snap.
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'Now,I can see there's one more innocent person I have to go through. Don't worry,Kristen.It'll only hurt a lot!'Linnea cackled as she raised her weapon at the redheaded psychiatrist, but Trinity blocked her path. 'Wait! Linnea,I know how it feels to lose someone close. But killing all these people isn't going to bring Autumn back.' the white haired 12 year old explained 'My friend Kristen's never done anything to you. If anyone should die here,it's me.'
Kristen could only stare in horror. The brunette maniac smiled at Trinity for a second 'You know,you're right.' Linnea snarled. She grabbed the needle and stabbed Trinity in the heart!Trinity screamed in pain,but Linnea would show no mercy.
Linnea pushed down on the needle's plunger,letting a deadly dose of the lethal poison known as cyanide into Trinity's chest. 'You b----!' Kristen screamed at the brunette maniac. -
Linnea ripped the needle out of Trinity's chest, the tip of it was soaked in blood. Kristen picked up the limp body of her friend Trinity Field, noticing that she was still alive, but didn't have much time left.
Kristen flitted away, not daring to look behind her and already knowing that the homicidal Linnea Samuels was chasing after her. The redheaded psychiatrist finally turned around and saw that the brunette psycho was no where to be found. Still clutching her best friend,Kristen opened the fire exit and ran out.
The very second she got out,police were surrounding Linnea and the Insane Asylum had exploded. 'Holy crap!' the redheaded psychiatrist cried. It was obvious that the homicidal brunette had planted a time-bomb in the Asylum.She thanked God that she'd escaped.
Kristen turned her attenion back to Trinity. She'd stopped breathing and had no pulse. 'Trinity,please.' the psychiatrist sobbed. Now, she knew very well that Trinity was dead. 'I'm sorry,Trin.'
5 days later...
Everyone Trinity knew came to her funeral,including Kristen herself. Before she left, she placed Trinity's favorite ribbon on her grave. With tears in her eyes, she sighed 'Farewell,Trinity.'...
THE END
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that's great
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Yeah,it did. And a really emotional ending.
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I'd better start planning the 3rd book,sooner or later.
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Kick ass story. And im glad you used my death ideas
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