The Bird
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Thread Topic: The Bird
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sandpaper wings
that flutter against my chest
kept inside a brittle
matchstick bird nest
all tied together
with ribbons and a smile
shattered at the clumsy seams
with a tempest of guile
my birdcage of bones
fracturing at its joints
splitting paper skin
gradually to the breaking point
a broken-winged bird inside itself
one song away from a shout
folding its fragile wings in
to keep everyone else out -
fine, no feedback it fine too :(....xD
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*is
WHAT?!! Is my poem too stupid for you all to relate to?? I know, you are all great poets, but i'm a meager peasant trying to get somewhere with this crap...so just one comment??
xD I sound soooo desperate..RAWR
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